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Karmadactyl [2011-07-22 22:30:24 +0000 UTC]

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This is simply wonderful and I could see why person who you basted if off liked it the shading is impressive. But I will agree witha.deviantart.net/avatars/b/l/b… " alt=" " title="blackXXraine"/> on the fact that the eyes seem a little too wide and face is a little small. Also the shoulders are maybe too far apart, and I would have to say that the speaker does seem a bit too big. But as far as the folds of the cloths go nicely done. They seem to me very natural. Also the guitar neck seems a little bit too wide on near the middle and bottom. The very top of the guitar neck seems fine just the bottom seems a bit off is all. Over all I would say it very impress and very well done.

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Seen-Artist [2011-08-12 13:54:05 +0000 UTC]

I loooove the shadowing but id agree with *princeoftennisfan about the eyes (if u want realism) personally i dont mind i think its nice personality of your own style to the piece. nice work!

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ZetaZero [2011-07-24 07:01:40 +0000 UTC]

Hi, I'm from 's Critique team.

This is a very nice drawing. I like how you added a lot of detail on the clothing and background. Good job on the hair too, the shading really made it appeal. The composition is very nice and gives off that homeless feeling. I think you can work on the guitar, being the secondary focus of the image, it lacks appealing features. Sure, it has a lot of lines and details, but it lacks depth like the rest of the picture. As thin as it is, you can add extra lines to its edges to make it feel more three dimensional. The right hand is well done, but the left's fingers are jagged and slightly irregular, try rounding the tips a bit more. His left hand also looks like he doesn't have a wrist. You can make this easier by pulling down his sleeve slightly, and revealing more of the wrist and the back of his hand. Overall, I think this is a very impressive and detailed drawing.

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Charlene-Art [2011-07-24 06:48:53 +0000 UTC]

I really like the cross-hatching and the pose of this character. His slouch and the music do really make this impressive. My only suggestion would be to emphasise his slouch a bit more by making his back curved. At the moment it is very straight and stiff. I found this to be an excellent tutorial on poses in characters: [link]

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Bernouilli [2011-07-23 18:54:19 +0000 UTC]

I like the pose, they seem really natural and relaxed, but then their expression is one of disdain, so it makes an interesting conflict between their body language that draws the viewer in.

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Neoconvoy [2011-07-23 15:15:12 +0000 UTC]

I think the composition is good too. But you can expand the shading of the floor and wall to the right side too. Aside from some anatomy issues regarding the arms and face, the shading is nice, also, the work on the fabrics is good.

Work more on your cross-hatching, and the shapes of the objects.

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blackXXraine [2011-07-22 05:46:15 +0000 UTC]

i think the composition is decent i think everything could have shifted down a tad and to the left and the guitar case should be on the right side of the speaker

as for the drawing.. it's not bad i think his eye is too wide .. and face in general a bit small compared to his features
the speaker i think is also too big compared to him ..
i'm not that great w/ anatomy but from my observationssss
his left shoulder is too low or too far left .. since his angle seems to be shifted slightly .. the shoulder should be more to the right

i think the folds are pretty decent .. i'm not that great w/ folds so.. ; cant say too much about that

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