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Velink β NUzlocke Black and White J.A.L. 20 part 3/2
Published: 2013-03-10 20:59:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 5485; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 11
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Welp finally I updated JALjust an extra page, but welp, it is something!
when working on this page I get stuck on one of the dialog, so I stop for a bit
enjoy the page XD
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As usual, comments and constructive criticism are highly appreciated
(and if there are typos, I would very much appreciate it if anyone would point that out so that I can fix it too)
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Comments: 94
never utter those ungodly word infront of a womenΒ
the consequences are...
*shiver
*hides in a nuclear bunker .... under ground.... surrounded by lavaΒ
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some learned it the hard way
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naaaay man
it will be too bloody
*shot*
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real sailor sails in red sea!!
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fantastic expressions and colors, and great characterization. and MMM dem stylish shades
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Lol thanks man!
if you pay close attention to the next page
you will spot him!
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no problem, and oh ho, sweet
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LOl she punched a clean hole in an obsidian rock
so, why wouldn't she do something like this?
after all in pokemon world, you can punch electric and fire (anime reference)
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Nice Timburr design. The page has a nice flow to it and is overall hilarious.
Nghhh, sorry for the reaaally late comment.
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there is never a late comment lol
feel free to comment anytime XD
the Timburr with shades?
we will see him again sometime
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The girl. But her brother is nice-looking too.
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OH the girl?
sorry i thought you are talking about her brother because this is his debut page not hers
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I still couldn't get the time to calmly read JAL. Will do,though.
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no rush, take your time
I updates pretty slowly anyway
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well, this is a different series...
lol
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Well it makes sense to you,but it doesn't make sense to me... That's why I like it !
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Yup,doesn't make sense to me. Just the way I like it .
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I am confused
so does the joke in this page make sense or not?
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Maybe I it does, maybe it doesn't . I'm messing with your head .
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my head is messed up
as if it is not messed up enough already
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I actually learned what 'on your rag' meant today. Convenient. lD
Way to go Janet! xD
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Eyyy Tokii XD
yeah my female friend told me about it XD
actually when I asked her, it was also the first time knowing it for me.
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Hahaha xD OMG. I like this girl. She's both cute and hilarious. Also, her bro has the best hairdo ever xD
Also glad to see you updating JAL! I really like the style of it, and the unique characters. xD Seriously <3 You're great at conveying expressions.
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lol yeah XD
welp, I was stuck with what would causes her anger int his page....
so I work my ZUBATMAN until I think of something...
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She's angry because SHE DOESN'T NEED A REASON NOW GET OUT OF HER WAY! -flees-
x3
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she may be the one with PMS, but she won;t be the one bleeding!
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the boys' last will?
most probably they will write her name with their blood
woops that is not last will, that is dying message
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It reminds of a story with messages written with blood on walls and a giant snake! XD In a castle!
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and her potential trainer has a snake lol
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They can open the scret chamber of Hogwards then! XD
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lol yeah
but then where is the castle?
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I could say but I warn you there is a spoiler if you haven't finished the game yet.
SPOILER*
team plasma's castle!*
End of the spoiler.
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Arghh spoiler!!
wonder who the evil overlord is!!
must be N!
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In fact, it's in the opening cutscene of the games, I'vz just noticed that.
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Yeah! he must be the main villain!
who else could be the main villain?
those old guy in coat?
no way!
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lol yeah!~!
by the next page, the two would be the one with bloods all over them
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