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Published: 2005-11-11 01:00:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 5062; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 747
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Yeah, so I can't keep you guys in the dark any longer. I'm sorry, this page could have been submitted a week ago, but I'm so busy (and so TIRED), I can't find the time.
But I'm trying another new technique with this page: readable dialouge. I opened the picture up in Elements and typed over the written words; I wonder if it looks better or if I should have kept it the way it was?
This is the last page I have actually done; I still have a panel to do on 24 and some stuff to color on 25, but I haven't drawn all week and I won't be able to sit done and do everything out for a while. *sigh*
Ah well. Life is life. This page basically explains how Jared and Raven will bring Terra back. DO NOT ask me specific questions about Jared's powers, this is one of the two major plot gaps in my story, so shut up and accept it, okay? I love you.
Enjoy... yadda yadda
(P.S.: My friend Nicole is fully to blame for Cyborg's lumpy head; she made me laugh while I was on the phone and inking this, and my pen slipped...
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oh man! this is awesome!!1 did you know you're such a good drawer?? (please dont answer...) I love the way you draw them! Its so close to the real ones!!! and I love the plot of the story, its like terra and bb's but this time its raven's SO KEEP IT UP PLEASE!!!
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you didn't link the page 24 here [link] 
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This is really cool, I startedwih page 1 and read straight through. Post more soon?
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Your comic is really cool! But why do they have to bring Terra back?! I'm sure she's happy with being a rock, and all...at least I'm happy with it!
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Fantastic!
I've read all of them up to here and I anxiously await the next up date.
Tell me, if you would, is this written prior to drawing or made up as it goes.
If there is a story written somewhere I would very much like to read it. Your work is fascinating.
Thank you!
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I thught terra came back as a schoolgirl, has no powers, and no memory of what happened in the past.
And I thought Slade had no powers, he was like robin, lots of wepons and a martial arts master.(at least when raven's dad brought him back to life)
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Im, like, addicted to this series.
Which is odd because there is no bb/rae shipping going on.
Um... yah.
HURRY WITH THE NEXT SUBMISSION!!! XD
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What's up with all this finishing each other's senteces stuff?
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WHOOOOOOOOOO TERRA'S COMING BACK! ....Right? XD I HOPE SO! BEAST BOY MUST BE AS HAPPY AS POSSIBLE! And that can only be accomplished with Terra by his side! ...Okay, I know, corny XD
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eeeeeep!!!! getting good oh really good must go read next one (i cant detail comment cuz i dont gots the time...waaaaa!!! oh and good job twards the other commics u have submitted i dont have time to comment just read and i ish gonna read as much as i can!)
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Thanks! I've finally gotten to the story. 
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its ok i under stand dont woory!!! i
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Yay! Can't wait for it! :3
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With this touch i give you Life!!!!
the power of the dark side can do ANYTHING! j/k
sweetness
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I'm trying! lolz Thank you!
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heheh Very interesting! Yessssss! I like the typing the same as your writing. :3 Awesome job!
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Thank you! 
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No problem! Yeah, I see what you mean. ^^
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IT'S ALL NICOLE'S FAULT!!!!
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SWEET!!! i never thought of that way of bringing her back!!! 
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I'm hanging off the edge of my chair, and my chair isn't big enough. Someone get me a bigger one!
Great work. I notice BB's look should be happy, but it's more of a 'Wha'ch you talkin' bout guys?' mixed with anger.
I think BB is happy Terra's coming back, but doesn't like the fact Jared is going to make it happen.
Oh, and the text is a lot better. I could read it before, but this way is much better. Another great job.
Now go and get some sleep!
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Drag an armchair in front of your comp. 
omg, you totally nailed BB's facial expression! I didn't think anyone would look that hard. I'm glad you like the new text too; it makes it much easier on me, not having to write neatly (which I'm bad at). I got a great night's sleep last night, except I crashed on the ping-pong table in my basement, and woke up at three in the morning. I was like, "Oh, sh*t, where am I?" 
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See what happens when you listen to me? You get better!
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You're just superior like that!
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hangn on the edge of my seat!!...*falls of chair*..., cant wait to see the next 1!!
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I just read your whole comic so far and I'm loving it!
I'm going to watch you!
Awesome awesome job so far!
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^^ Thank you! (x3)
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cooooool beans! even tho i'm not a fan of terra it would be cool to see her come back in the show.. but still evil! lol great job cant wait for the next page.... also like the new readable... i liked the other better but i have a big screen that lets me see things better! lol
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Thanks! I'm glad to hear you like it, even though it doesn't fit your fandom! 
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