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Published: 2016-03-08 16:48:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 426; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description And here is the page I know. I can't draw Eggface for shit. And hands are friggin hard to draw damn it, espechially if they are to grab onto something, man I need to work on that. Callyzah my friend, do please point out everything that is wrong with this page. and I do mean everything, the whole thing is a mess. God, I'm sorry about this.
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Comments: 6

Callyzah [2016-03-09 14:22:19 +0000 UTC]

heheeh! yes sir!!   no technical error that I can see. in fact the timing, the scenery, the environment, everything is great!
about the hands... I think they're okay!! just keep going the practice!! 
the only point I'd change (a detail, actually) the 5 frame. the arm could be stretched, instead of being bent, since the man is away, and in the next frame he approaches and bend naturally his arm.
but everything is very amazing!!!  you've outdone yourself!! XDDDDDDDDDD

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vaporeonxglaceon In reply to Callyzah [2016-03-09 17:37:32 +0000 UTC]

I still think it is a giant piece of mess, the second to last panel Eggface's head is giant compared to his body. And thank you for the comment, and I'll see what I'll do with those darned hard to draw hands.

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Callyzah In reply to vaporeonxglaceon [2016-03-09 18:13:58 +0000 UTC]

heheeh okay!!

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vaporeonxglaceon In reply to Callyzah [2016-03-09 20:21:30 +0000 UTC]

I'll get it right by the next one. Promise

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Callyzah In reply to vaporeonxglaceon [2016-03-10 00:56:38 +0000 UTC]

okay!! ^^

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vaporeonxglaceon In reply to Callyzah [2016-03-10 06:05:01 +0000 UTC]

hehehehe

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