Internal-Flame13 [2012-05-18 17:20:52 +0000 UTC]
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I really love this peice. Especially senice I just finsihed watching the Scorcers Apprentice XD The colours are really nice and the background is beautiful.But on the subject of colours I must say, I think that the "witch" is too bright for her surroundings. I relize that the glow from her hand may attribute to this but I think it's too much. I think she needs to be a few shades darker, because her enviroment depicts are dark and eery area.I think it would have been better to dull her colours, and leave a few of the edges lighter to show highlights from the moon on her back. The glow from the spell is highlighted perfectly on to her but i dont think that it would be giving off enough light to make her entire body so bright.
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Vampy-note In reply to Internal-Flame13 [2012-05-19 00:13:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your critique! I agree completely with the points you made and I shall work to fix them Thank you again
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Vampy-note In reply to Internal-Flame13 [2012-05-19 00:12:53 +0000 UTC]
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Internal-Flame13 In reply to Vampy-note [2012-08-14 04:49:44 +0000 UTC]
Im glad it made sense to you. it is my first time writting a crictic and I cant wait to see the updated work <3
peroni68 [2012-05-16 18:41:18 +0000 UTC]
I love the colors....and the lighting! Beautifully done!
Vampy-note In reply to peroni68 [2012-05-16 20:47:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks
peroni68 In reply to Vampy-note [2012-05-16 21:06:58 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome dear!
Dani-Owergoor [2012-05-16 15:53:42 +0000 UTC]
It's always fun play with colors, dear, I enjoy a lot!You did a great job here!!!
Vampy-note In reply to Dani-Owergoor [2012-05-16 20:46:54 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much