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xelianthought [2017-02-05 12:06:54 +0000 UTC]
Adorable!Β
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Nightshade2003 [2016-07-06 01:11:48 +0000 UTC]
mm feathers always taste the best XD
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LW9510 [2016-05-30 11:52:24 +0000 UTC]
Ears how do they work but very cute
nom
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Nightshade2003 [2016-04-26 12:35:53 +0000 UTC]
rainbvow dash, what're you up to.....
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KawaiiBlossomFox [2016-04-01 07:29:44 +0000 UTC]
Are they now shipping RD with TL!? THATS IT IM OUT!!!!!
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LW9510 [2016-03-29 06:39:59 +0000 UTC]
What would she do without me
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FROSKII [2016-03-27 22:05:44 +0000 UTC]
its not sexual, its like itching a dog's ear---ish
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JUPIKITTEN [2016-02-18 20:18:29 +0000 UTC]
nomnomnomnom
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cantcme27 [2015-12-23 06:48:03 +0000 UTC]
Twi: Oh, Rainbow. Right there that's the spot. *she coos*
RD: We should preen each other more often.Β
Twi: Mmhmm.
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CharliDrawz [2015-05-28 23:27:53 +0000 UTC]
THAT TICKLES! AH HA HA HA!
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SchwarzerRitter [2015-05-01 18:56:24 +0000 UTC]
And then nothing sexual happened.
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Madpadness In reply to SchwarzerRitter [2015-12-22 04:50:50 +0000 UTC]
And then the shippers wrote stories about twilight and rainbow dash and in those stories sexual stuff happened.
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Hatchetstein4Real [2015-04-15 05:43:28 +0000 UTC]
ADORABLE as they are! X3Β
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GJTProductions [2015-03-03 18:32:43 +0000 UTC]
"...Rainbow Dash?"
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MisterKaos In reply to GJTProductions [2015-04-18 10:44:40 +0000 UTC]
...This isn't what it looks like?
This is exactlyΒ what it looks like!
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JustinBaker23 [2015-02-24 06:48:24 +0000 UTC]
Adorable!
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shadowbro1 [2015-02-24 05:11:38 +0000 UTC]
diebetus...ded
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Goremise [2015-02-10 20:12:32 +0000 UTC]
Adorable!
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johne16minecrafted [2015-02-10 14:17:52 +0000 UTC]
(rainbow dash head) mmmmm straw berry
now i know why princess selestia like here that much
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Parrthurnax105 [2015-02-09 20:07:45 +0000 UTC]
what are you doing??
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Kawaii-Shy [2015-02-09 18:56:52 +0000 UTC]
Β Β Β
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cajobif [2015-02-09 01:46:33 +0000 UTC]
Twilight: Ahhhhhh... That's the spooooot... I-I couldn't bear that itch any longer...
Rainbow Dash: You houl pheen youh whiiing-
T: What?
RD: *spits* I said that you should preen you wings more often.
T: I know, I know.... My book told me I should do at least weekly.
RD: Weekly? How long you waited for getting rid of that itch?
T: Uh... I scheduled to do it on Monday.
RD: What? You would have waited two more days? Come on Twi! You got to be kidding me!
T: Well... I have a... tight schedule...
RD: Okay. Let me make this clear... You have time for reading any book anytime? But doing something this important to your wings... as important as cleaning yourself of brushing your mane... is a DAILY thing to do! How can you be this negligent?
T: Says the one who keep practising new air tricks but that I keep catching taking naps more that once in a day?
RD: Hey! They are tiring okay? I need some rest sometimes.
T: Right.
RD: Totally.
Rainbow gone back at preening.
T: *sigh* I'm sorry Rainbow. I need so much to learn from that new position as princess that I keep forgetting doing something this simple.
RD: *spits* That's okay. But your wing was messed up big time. Move it now.
Twilight flapped her newly preened wing.
T: That's so much better. Thanks Rainbow Dash.
RD: You're welcome. But you gotta need to do it when it is necessary. Beside from your wings, did you ever waited a week just for getting rid of itch?
Twilight looked away with a guilt face.
RD: Seriously? *groan*
T: I had finals! I had to study a dozen books before the next week! I couldn't simply stop and scratch! Who pony can scratch its back by itself?
RD: Even when taking a simple shower?
Twilight looked again, even more full of guilt.
RD: Y-you gotta be kidding me... That's it!
Rainbow flew to the door.
T: W-where are you going? You didn't preen my other wing!
RD: You are going to do it by yourself.... and now!
T: What? I told you! I don't have the time...
RD: Tell me... How many ponies had to stand your smell at class, miss Smelly Twi?
The alicorn opened her mouth but didn't say a word and drop her head.
T: Twenty. And they did call me Smelly Twi.
Rainbow tried her best for not laughing, but bursted in laugh anyway.
RD: Wow! That's not what I was expect-
The pegasus stopped when she saw her friend still low.
RD: Aww... Come on Twi! This was the past! You got to see the future... and wash more sometimes. *snicker*
T: Not funny, Dash. However, the name disappeared when they learned my reasons and that I got the top scores.
She stood proud and smiling.
RD: Yeah, yeah...
She resumed her leaving.
T: You really are not going to help me out?
She looked at Dash with a cute face.
RD* heavy sigh* All right. But this the last time, okay? I got-
T: Air tricks to practise... or naps to take?
RD: Don't push it!
T: *giggle* Sorry, sorry!
Rainbow landed by her friend and took her other wing in my mouth.
T: Ahhh... You know Rainbow? You are right.
RD: I ham?
T: I shouldn't put non important matters before taking care of necessities first.
Rainbow nodded.
T: So, right after you preen my right wing, I'll go take care of-
Her belly growled. She let go an embarrassed laugh.
T: ... and go out for lunch. I'm inviting you for thanking you for your help.
RD: Really? Can we go out to that fancy restaurant at the end of the town?
T: Actually... I'm starving for a hayburger and fries.
RD: Umm. That will do too. But you will need to do this by yourself from now. Or next time, you'll need to pay me a meal at that fancy place and it gotta cost you.
T: Got it. Wait a minute!
RD: What?
T: H-how did you know I needed preening? I never called you!
RD: Uh... lucky guest?
Twilight glared at her.
RD: What? A pegasus knows when another needs one... badly.
T: So you are telling me you could see when Fluttershy need preening?
RD: Huh? Fluttershy took very good care or her wings. Even if she doesn't us them as often as me.
T: Dash?
The pegasus looked around, trying to avoid her gaze. But eventually...
RD: All right! All right! It's Fluttershy who told me you needed it. She saw you twitching when you were flapping your wings.
T: Then, why she didn't come to do it herself?
RD: I-I don't know. She only told me you needed preening.
The looked at each other in a awkward silence for a minute.
T: Did you finished the wing?
RD: Yeah. Time for the lunch?
T: Yeah. Let's go.
I hope you enjoyed. BEautiful and cute work.
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LW9510 In reply to cajobif [2016-03-29 06:37:35 +0000 UTC]
I couldnt sleep fast last night because thinking of a silimar fanfic but have no time to write
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cajobif In reply to LW9510 [2016-03-29 22:24:14 +0000 UTC]
There are quite a lot of TwiDash fanfics around to read for those who are interested.
Same for the other shippings. Good or crack.
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LW9510 In reply to cajobif [2016-03-30 13:12:21 +0000 UTC]
I dont mean twidash another thing but its a long story
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cajobif In reply to LW9510 [2016-03-31 00:08:19 +0000 UTC]
Okay.
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Goremise In reply to cajobif [2015-02-10 20:09:44 +0000 UTC]
*applauds*
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TotallyMew [2015-02-08 12:57:52 +0000 UTC]
Aww it's adorable!
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ReaverPan [2015-02-08 04:14:40 +0000 UTC]
lol that looks it tickles XD
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