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Tworoads — no post on sundays
Published: 2009-08-05 21:38:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 559; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 5
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Description i'll grab old paper yellowed with age and the smell of wisdom soaked into its sheets.  the porch swing will rock as i attempt to think of words to write down; the black ink will leave a few splotches to remind me nothing is perfect.  i'll feel it's somehow important, but i won't remember why.

children play in the next yard, reminding me of how blissful ignorance and youth's naivete can be.  i'll take a breath of the sweet autumn air, the perfume of crunched leaves, and smile to myself like the grumpy old man who acts like he hates the weather and laughter of children but secretly enjoys it very much behind the living room's curtains.

and the first sprinkles of rain over emeralds and gold standing thirteen feet high will signal something even more significant, will spark a memory that makes me feel as though i shall float when i walk, never touching the ground in utter happiness.  the fog will roll in like clouds to stumble through, enclosing the gems and me among ruby and amber fallen leaves.

and i will write all of this down on the paper so it can be documented, remembered for another day.  to will be my heart, from will be my mind.  a shiny stamp of muted sapphires  and a garnet seal of wax will adorn the envelope.  i'll put the post in the mailbox and wait with the little red flag up.  

and then i will remember that there is no post on sundays, but that monday is only one day away.
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Comments: 19

Sahmii-x [2009-08-16 01:49:27 +0000 UTC]

well there's my dose of nostalgia for the day.
i'm in love with the way your writing makes me feel.
not a lot of the things i read these days manage.

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Tworoads In reply to Sahmii-x [2009-08-16 02:07:55 +0000 UTC]

Feel, huh? Good to know. ^^


`n

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Sahmii-x In reply to Tworoads [2009-08-16 02:08:48 +0000 UTC]

haha, yah.
it's hard to explain. (:

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November-flashback [2009-08-14 19:43:08 +0000 UTC]

I love the atmoshpere of this

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Tworoads In reply to November-flashback [2009-08-14 19:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! And thanks for the faves. ^^


`n

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XxCindersxX [2009-08-13 21:21:04 +0000 UTC]

"the black ink will leave a few splotches to remind me nothing is perfect. i'll feel it's somehow important, but i won't remember why." --- you must be psychic. Great mindprobe, thx!

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Tworoads In reply to XxCindersxX [2009-08-14 00:38:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks! =]


`n

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NinnikuPanda [2009-08-06 23:37:14 +0000 UTC]

i know you told me about the end before i actually read this, but it made me smile nonetheless.
i've probably told you a million times, but you're brilliant with imagery.
one picture after another pops into my head while reading this.
lovely.

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Tworoads In reply to NinnikuPanda [2009-08-06 23:55:20 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thankyous.
I'm glad I have the talent then. =]


`n

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iheldyoucloser [2009-08-06 19:04:16 +0000 UTC]

i love the idea of this.
beautiful.

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Tworoads In reply to iheldyoucloser [2009-08-06 23:13:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. =]


`n

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SolinaBright [2009-08-06 04:10:35 +0000 UTC]

okay. now your most definatley wishing that there was a candle of autum. i like this alot, especially the part with the old man pretending that he hates the sound of children laughing, but inside loving it. Alot of people are like that. This is realy something! i love it! the title realy caught my attention as well. Marvelous work !



~sols

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Tworoads In reply to SolinaBright [2009-08-06 05:49:24 +0000 UTC]

Agreed. =] Glad you like it.



`n

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balancingartist [2009-08-06 01:32:51 +0000 UTC]

I love everything about this, especially the title.

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Tworoads In reply to balancingartist [2009-08-06 05:20:51 +0000 UTC]

I know, right? Something about the title's just so catchy.


Thanks,
`n

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TheFoxAstronaut [2009-08-05 22:03:49 +0000 UTC]

This piece brings warmth into my soul's core and makes my heart quiver with happiness. Your words sucked me into the story and now I can't get out. Everything about it makes my chapped lips crack into a smile. The ending is absolutely perfect. I'm turning cliche with all my compliments. Lovely, lovely, lovely.

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Tworoads In reply to TheFoxAstronaut [2009-08-05 22:04:54 +0000 UTC]

Hello, lovely.
Thank you very much, Mandy.


`n

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TheFoxAstronaut In reply to Tworoads [2009-08-05 22:06:49 +0000 UTC]

Hello yourself. x3 God, that really would be a good band name, eh?

But anyhow. You're very welcome.

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Tworoads In reply to TheFoxAstronaut [2009-08-05 22:09:46 +0000 UTC]

I think so. =]


`n

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