KnightxShield [2016-01-27 14:50:48 +0000 UTC]
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I would like to start with the color palette; great choice going with the K.o.B. colors in the overall piece. I think it really brings everything together, and it works well. I like the graphic you made that has the NerveGear logo inside it, and the similar graphic that has a zoomed-in portrait of Asuna's face; personally, I would have liked to see a few more graphics like that to break up the background a bit.
I understand the direction you took by using the ink-splat effects on the background, but I personally don't think there needs to be exactly that much; it sort of takes away from who Asuna is as a character/person. Maybe it could have been something like rings or cooking utensiles, maybe even a lightning bolt or two since her nickname in SAO was "Lightning Flash".
The character design is FANTASTIC! I love how Asuna looks, and the graphic style and design is very well-done. I have to say, though, that it almost looks like a shot from one of the SAO games' cutscenes (Infinity Moment, Hollow Fragment, etc.), but aside from that, I can't complain about the character design ^^
I hope this helps you out next time ^^
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twcfree In reply to KnightxShield [2016-01-27 15:23:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much ,Yes her costume is based on Infinity Moment and Hollow Fragments ,Thanks so much once again
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