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Published: 2014-02-06 04:39:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1327; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 1
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yes do that I want to see
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Yep I will but been having computer issues
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Glad it's working now
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Can you read my story "Are you Guardian or Country?" and tell me your thoughts on it?
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well 2p Germany will get to you but my personal opinion is this... mixing the rise of the guardians and hetalia is a good idea if dune properly... but um japan seems out of character it was stated in the cannon that he only gets mad at rising food prices no offence but if you writ a pre written character make sure to research them ...an oc is a tricky card to play as well most tune in to fanfic's for the already existing characters. an oc needs to be developed well (since your oc was just introduced in the end its hard to tell if there going to a good oc or not) but just a note a kid character need to act like a kid (bratty but with good harts) and no character should ever be perfect make sure they some personality flows. and make sure your oc is well used not to often but well developed. other then that I don't know what elas I can say as you only have one chapter out so keep righting (don't worry if you don't get as many views as you'd like weight a bit you'll get more and more viwes)
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um, actually, I finished the story, you can find it on my deviart page.... and thank you..
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ah found the other ones and am reviewing page by page.... look my opinions that i left or pretty brutally honest and I meant no offence by them. but you asked for my thoughts and I gave them. if you don't like them after reading one or two or feel hurt by them please stop reading them as I don't wont to hurt your feelings. and I apologize if I do so i am not trying to be hurtful...
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it's understandable, it's my first story, so there are going to be flaws...
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yep its a part of growing up to Mack mistakes and to except and try change them ^^. nothing is ever perfect
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... I found chapter 1 but that's it....
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I love it, I can totally picture 1p france and 2p Germany going to thing like strip clubs and all that kind of things!! XD
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hey, are questions still available?
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yep just been really really busy
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Just being honest ^.^
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