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tsukiko-kiyomidzu — Hindrance
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Hello, thank you for the awesome and interesting critiue! ^^ I really appreciate it )
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The face and shoulders look very realistic. I like the color combination and think you should experiment more with this element, to make it look even more amazing. I got the impression it's supposed to look like the black part is peeling and breaking away, maybe make it look more cracked if thats the effect you're going for. I admire how you carefully chose the negative space, in the background on the right side balanced with the black on the other side because it makes the piece more powerful. Overall this piece is great and I believe your work will get better and better in the future.
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thank you so much for the great critique! *_* I appreciate it )
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Abstract art...why? Ok, back to the case. The face proportions seems to be fine.
Shadow is placed correct. Reflection in eyes is also good. Colors...I honestly don't know. Whole face is painted in different collors which could mean that her (I quess it's her) emotions are chaotic. Is she confused or something?
The rest...the rest is very minimalistic and that was on purpose. I've got mixed feelings as well as this person. Don't know what more to say. In this abstract form there is no flaws to pinpoint couse everything could be done on purpose.
To sums it up. Work is good but this is not my cup of tea.
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thank you so much for the interesting critique! ^^
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All I can say is wow. This really moves me. I really love the colors you used here! I especially love how it looks like it was sloppily painted, but is really the complete opposite of that. It also makes me wonder what your inspiration for this. It also makes me wonder if you were feeling a certain way about something when creating this. My only critique is that maybe put your signature on it so someone doesn't steal it. It's too great of work for it to be stolen! I honestly want to see more from you in the future!
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Thank you for the interesting critique and your care! *_* Usually when I sign the pictures people can delete the sign in a Photoshop O_o
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I just really love art like this and I hate to see when people get their artwork stolen. I did rate lower on originality because there has been pieces of art done similar to this. But I will definitely watch you so I can see more of your work!
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Mysterious and very beautiful at the same time.
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thank you very much!!*_*
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thank you very much
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thank you so much!^^
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Great artwork. I love the variety of colors and the white and black spaces around these.
Congratulations.
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thank you very much!!
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This deserves a DD.. Like.. Seriously it REALLY does
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thank you very much!!
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Its first face in what i cant watch into eyes. Piersing one.
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Really good! I love the expression of the woman,and the colors,amazing job.
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And what is the hindrance? Something nagging at your side, an itch you can't scratch, a ghostly frustration that switches sides, one goes another arises. Just the impression I get.
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You know how to work wonders with your watercolour brushes, the effect is really dream-like and the colours are enchanting. Great job!
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thank you very much, it means a lot to me!
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Love the intense expression in the eyes. nice usage of colors too. gives an almost chaotic feeling, like a lot of emotions are going through the mind
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thank you very much ^^
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There is brightness in her life. She laughs, she has friends, and tries - with admirable stubborn determination - to move forward through her life, to reach her goals.
But not everything is possible, as we're taught to believe. Our goals are not the only ones which exist, and other peoples' goals often contradict our own. The black hand across her face represents the goals of others, often purposefully harmful, sometimes not, getting in her way as she tries her best. She's stubborn, but on her own, against the world, she's fading (the muted colors show this), she's slowly bleeding out as she's stretching herself thin and overworking herself.
The grey, which seems to me to represent her stone-like barriers she's put up to resist the hindrances in her life, are a hindrance themselves. They hide her true self, they take their toll on her living, beating heart. She's close to losing herself amid her own self-made hindrances.
Her goal was to fill this paper, fill the world, with her color and brightness, but she's struggling, partially because she doesn't understand that this goal itself is a hindrance.
By definition, a hindrance is "a thing that provides resistance, delay, or obstruction to something or someone".
Sharing yourself takes TIME, a DELAY.
Bringing brightness to the world ACTS AGAINST OTHERS OF THE WORLD, an OBSTRUCTION.
The world is RESISTANT TO CHANGE.
Bringing life to the world is a hindrance to the world.
But it's a hindrance worth fighting.
The only problem is that she's been so goal-oriented that she's forgotten the most important part of giving life to the world:
that giving life to the world means giving life to other people, because what is the 'world' but the collection of people on it?
She is not alone. There are others fighting too, whose goals do not merely can coexist with hers, but are beneficial to hers too. She need only reach out her hand.
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I'm shocked, I like your beautiful and detailed comments (it is very important for me), you have a talent! Thank you very very much again!
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You're very, very welcome! As in, really, you're welcome to my interpretations anytime! Just keep on arting when you can so I can give them! 
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I struggled with interpreting this one a bit. I think because I'm suffering this same fight. Thanks for the wonderful art again, tsukiko-kiyomidzu!
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I love this. The colors are fantastic and the look in her eyes is breathtaking.
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thank youvery much!^^
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