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Published: 2006-03-11 02:45:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 91; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description I’m on this ride,
That stops space and time,
That behind all these fake smiles and laughs,
Is the culprit and the crime,
And in my mind,
I feel blind from the light,
In this darkness it’s hard to fight despite all the light in my life,
We all try to climb high to touch the sky,
And inflate our nation’s pride like our quarters and dimes,
Accept plans with patience is the name of the game,
Let it flow out like blood, sweat, and tears in your veins,
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Comments: 7

DePoetry [2006-10-21 22:48:03 +0000 UTC]

for some reason a poets most random work is really really good lol. This was good.

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slowsuicide [2006-03-11 14:53:43 +0000 UTC]

wonderful.. as ALWAYS

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truballaboy In reply to slowsuicide [2006-03-11 16:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks J! I try to be on my A game and I'm glad that you like'em everytime

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chasingsirens [2006-03-11 13:54:30 +0000 UTC]

very good! i enjoyed it. definately something we can all relate too.

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truballaboy In reply to chasingsirens [2006-03-11 16:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment! I had to put something out here that was different

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theanswertolife [2006-03-11 03:13:24 +0000 UTC]

You evoke excellent imagery - a ride that stops space and time, touching the sky...I like your poems! They've got such a determined persuasive tone. One of the best poems I've seen so far!

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truballaboy In reply to theanswertolife [2006-03-11 04:42:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment! yea it's basically about putting on that fake smile to not let people in but I'm glad you like it

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