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Published: 2012-02-20 00:44:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 563; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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James is the Flirtacious brother that is preaching to his brothers how to pick up girls xD Will they work?James(Blonde)
Fore(emo)
Micheal(Anthro)
Megane N shiroshi (Bunny)
All of these characters belong to
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EDIT: Sorry it sucks :/
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N: fantastic!! i love the idea of this alot!! my favorite concepts thus far!! and with the little infomation i gave you on their personalities you still was able to execute them perfectly!! and the backrounds are very fitting to the mood of things!! great job !!
the only thing you may need to work on is the lineart. the final lineart should be clean, so it shouldnt have a sketchy feel to it. because when the lineart is like that and you add color it can tend to look a bit sloppy.
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Sloppy? o3o The lineart seems clean to me compared to what i did on gimp and DA muro. It doesn't seem sketchy I tried to have clean lines...so I don't know what you're talking about. Lately I've been drawing everything the same as I normally do... so I'm sorry I suck I guess :/ If you hate it I don't ahve to do it :/
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N: no no no thats not it, this is a wonderful and creative idea and i would love to see the rest but i mean you you know how you have multiple lines on one are of the drawing ing particular? thats wat it means to be sketchy. the lines should be a bit, smoother.
but really please continue this you dont suck really you dont. and really i do love it, please continue.
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Idk I always had sketchy lines for the hair :/ Like in general I didn't think it was THAT bad. *shrug* idk then in that case you won't like the rest because I used the same style.
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N: avdhkgedh that is not what i meant >A< IT IS AWESOME PLEASE SHUT UP ABOUT IT BEING BAD.
what i meant was its like.
[link] notice hot on multiple part of the piece i have lines repeating itself from many place? thats what i menat. BUT THE ART IS GREAT, SO STAY QUIET FOR A SECOUND.
as compared to[link] where the lines dont repeat themselves, they are a single smooth line more or less.
that is wat i meant by clean lineart. your art is great, i mean i really love your style but im just trying to help a bit by telling you about your lineart.
please dont take this the wrong way, you have wonderful art dont doubt yourself, please dont. im not saying your art is terrible or anything just a friendly tip, on how to improve.
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i gotta be honest i really like the sketchy version better... it looks like so much incorportated detail and it made my eyes wander to figure everything out... i loved the pencil versio *o* idk... the color to me... meh... it doesnt seem as exciting to me as the sketchy version in my opinion... o3o;;
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N: alright i see what your saying but tell me this if i were to color the sketchy version with the way i did the finished version, would it not look sloppy?
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Well personally i love traditional works black and white... but the powerful colors over it would overwhelm the viewer... there must be harmony between both i think =w= Like softer implied colors might work... or just use a simgle color to get the point :>
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N: okay what i meant is, if you were still able to see the lines as sketchy as they are, but colored would in not look sloppy?
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... i agree to that. but i personally like the traditional sketch better left the way it is...
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N: yes yes i get it, but i hope my point got across about the lineart. nevermind the color. but imagine the difference between the lineart and WIP if both were colored the way you wanted it.
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i tried to draw it less sketchy but it looks exactly the same :/
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N: well in my opinion it looks a lot better. 
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i mean its not i was trying to suck... i havent really done anything like this before... its alot of characters for me and i was honestly trying its not like i was trying to disappoint you
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N: i kno and for the last time im not saying you suck, if you make that accusation one more time im going to cut the conversation from you. really im not dissapointed in the least bit. your art is great, and im sorry if this overwhelmed you. i shouldnt have suggested this had i known you were to bash yourself so hard after i just tried to help. but really i enjoy your art. i didnt mean anything terrible by sloppy.
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;w; i didnt mean to bash myeslf im just really sensitive and i just figured out a style that looks decent... i mean i get that u were trying to critique me but im still working on getting better anyway... its only a matter of time. ;w; most of my stuff already started to look cleaner now
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N: well yes i could see that from the first time i saw you use photoshop with the picture of roxas. well i didnt mean for my critque to discourage you in anyway, just again a tip. and in a matter of time, wat does that mean? you are sayin just because a few monthes past youre going to become better? without any critiques, suggestions, or a bit of frustration? sorry but to me that doesnt make sense.
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well in a matter of time... dude ive been digitally drawing since june... and do you see the improvement???? I do... that's why I say in a matter of time I can become better... I'm not saying without critiques, suggestions... and dude im frustrated all the time... @w@:;;;; because i want my stuffs to look better than ever before... I'll never give up by trying to get better... people don't normally give me critiques... but i knew my lineart isnt the cleanest... but over time i think i would have grown out of that in order to get better. o3o;;;; i mean... for yours when you color it still looks really flat in my opinion like theres no depth *shrug*
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N: yes there is improvement, i see that, and you said it yourself you need suggestion to help you no? then why won't you take mine.
i can see how my color can still be flat. people have told me that and i have been working on it, but thank you for telling me what i need to work on
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I am taking your advice... I tried on the 2nd page!!! my lineart is less sketchy in these pictures [link]
[link] (the legs were the only thing that look sketchy)
[link]
Well im sorry i messed up ur comic then.
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N: yep the line art improved a good deal.
*sigh* there no getting through to you is there?
you didnt mess up. i was just trying to suggest something.
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through to me? Don't you see that i'm trying to get better? I'm not ignoring ur advice... i'm just beating myself up for not noticing sooner... I really like the hairstyle... I really want to have arina tanemuras hair styles... but i can see that was a fail... i dont want to have hair lineart because if u look at th soul eaters style then it looks too simple... i gotta figure out a way to make it look good... im just trying to figure things out. ;w;
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N: i can see your trying to be better, and if you beat your self up if wont do you any good on your art. itll just hinder your ability to do so.
a good way to practice her hairstyle is to actually copy (w/o tracing) one of her drawings.
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I guess I'll find my own style of hair then @w@;;; Well seeing the flaws in my art can help me improve to get better with my determination... instead of being cocky and automatically assuming "im the greatest" which im not but i know artists who do that :/ ... ;w;
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N:then i wish you the best of luck.
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ill get better i promise
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N: i know you will
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wtf?! I like it already! I want the next page so badly~!
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he's gonna go through the steps of picking up girls... but i believe you'll like the last part the best
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sorry ku-chan i give way under ur pressure ;w; but... i could make it much worse >:3
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another ending that had to be cut off would be nice~ lolz!
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like i said i can make it much worse >:3
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o////o idk if i can draw that kind of stuff yet
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lolz how crazy are u makin this?!
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then y is it gunna b censored?
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well if you DO need any help... *wink wink nudge nudge*
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