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Ebonsong [2013-03-20 17:25:14 +0000 UTC]

Spelling looks perfect to me.

What an interesting expression, not sure if she's smiling, has a bit of fear in her eyes or what. Her nostrils & shading in her hair seem very dark. I think her irises should have been darkened a bit (or at least the pupils), with brighter highlights over the eyes.

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toshi13go In reply to Ebonsong [2013-03-20 20:41:29 +0000 UTC]

haha, you're right the nostrils are a bit, ehem, dark. Gotta be more careful with black

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Ebonsong In reply to toshi13go [2013-03-20 22:01:19 +0000 UTC]

The nostrils would be fine, if you also made the eyes more contrasted. As it is, the contrast is strong at the nose, so my eyes are drawn there - when I think they should be drawn to the eyes.

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toshi13go In reply to Ebonsong [2013-03-20 22:27:36 +0000 UTC]

i see, thanks

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