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Toni-Dogma — Rokkurro
Published: 2009-05-23 19:27:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1808; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Artist's website.The frame is supposed to be a slideshow.
Would LOVE some critique! ...pretty please
A whole lot of stock I know! From here as well as xchng.hu. I'll credit it all when I have time to figure it all out... I don't right now, I'm way behind on my final exam project and damn essay writing ...I HATE writing essays
stock:
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sofa: [link]
easel: [link]
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yeee Stella, it is very good, I like it, I was reading comments about colours and I am agree with them so I am not going to write about it once more 
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Thank you marta!
hehe hopefully it will be up and running soon
Have a nice work too!
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I really love it
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Glad you liked it! 
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I was trying to check all details, as well as the overall look. Well, there are stuffs which are not fitting into the picture because of their colors, but I think it just make it more "dream-like" and interesting, so I'm not sure if I would change them. But I think they atteact to much attention comparing to the painting on the wall, or the menu on the top of the page.
And one more thing: for me, the menu and the name is too close to the edge, while there's such a "big" space under the sofa, where the floor is too empty compared to the rest of the picture.
These are just my thoughts, which I wanted to share with you, coz I know it can be useful to hear other people's thoughts before have the final version.
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thank you peter
They probably do attract a bit too much attention, it is all very bright and chaotic, but at the same time the style reinforces the style of the work and thus instead of destracting it strengthens the general feeling and style of the artist ...I hope. What do you think? Is it too distracting?
Also when the art is a moving slideshow it becomes a center of attention ...I hope.
The menu is a bit lower on the website
Thank you for your thoughts! ...they are quite similar to my own, matters which I've been trying to justify.
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Well, after talking about this framed picture, it is getting my attention more and more
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Stella - now it looks great
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thank you! I was going for a cozy/welcoming atmosphere, glad you got that feeling
Yes I know, the rooster is pretty unnatural, I haven't touched the colours on it sense I think I'll be removing it later on ...and I just forgot about that muffin, need to fix those colours
Thanks for your input
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hope was useful
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congratulations amazing composition, have a nice day
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thank you!
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