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Published: 2014-02-02 04:44:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1377; Favourites: 50; Downloads: 0
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Exhausted, but I did it, yes! Also edited the dialogue a bit so it wasn't as weirdly ominous. Asmodai's still a softy~I re-watched the bulk of the Project A-ko movies working on this, good stuff!
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it doesn't bleed either, so I can't kill it.
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Asmodai, don't you dare.
Asmodai.
Assmode, are you even listening.
Augh, man doesn't know when to take punches or how to dodge them...
Also, Teo probably should have stayed out of this one...
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ASMODAI MISBEHAVES~ but perhaps he'll make up for it!
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TO hear it, bluh typos.
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Hopefully moreso soon~!
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Ooooh, what's this? Β Asmodai willing to stick his neck out for Ame this time around? Β I like this new side of him; it's definitely more active and less passive compared to his old self. Β A fitting image of the Noble Demon trope, indeed.
Possible new fave side character in the works~ Β c:
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Yar, he did so last time but it was such a heel turn it was like....GEKK.
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Don't you mean face turn?
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I'm not hip and with it, I often hear "heel face turn" as well.
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Ame is tsun as hell~
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We all would be with such a father
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Or at least a general idea of what he plans to do, mmmyes~
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Man, Ame's pupils sure are large in the first panel, ha!
With that said, things feel like they're about to escalate pretty soon! Also, the faces on Suko and Teo are great!
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Yeah I lightened em up a lot, do you think I should trim their size a bit too? I love feedback that'll help tighten the page up!
ALL OF THE ESCALATION~
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Maybe just a bit, though it does look better now. To me, anyway.
ANTICIPATION INTENSIFIES
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Not sure why Teo and Suko are making those faces, but I'm sure I will find out soon.
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Everyone has a healthy amount of fear for the Big Red! Except maybe Emerald and Slade.
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lol I've been there. I see what you did because what Asmo says is super direct, and I know when that happens it means the artist is like I got to rewrite this- it happened to me in the page where Red talks to Random she originally complained that Random is too taken with Madeline to fight her properly, leading him to do what he did on page 21, the whole page they talk but I thought it would be weird to hear her voice but not see her- especially that the audience already doesn't know who she isΒ
So this is a 1900s style English trial where you are defended but can only respond? There's witnesses too right?Β
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Yar, I made it WAAAAAAAAY too vague even in the first draft of THIS page, it was far worse in the original ahahaha ;;
Nah, Ame isn't that lucky.
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I would like to see it sometime if you still have it. Β
Ame is...being railroaded?Β
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Literally just changed dialogue!
Yeeeeeeep.
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All da feels for softy Asmodai! /hugs him forever
Mine now can't have him back.
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So much feel.
KEEP HIM, HE'S EXPENSIVE. HE KEEPS WANTING TABLETOP MODELS.
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DATS OKAY AS LONG AS HE'S GOOD IN BED. fufufu
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Was a drink or something spilled in that last panel?
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Naw, just blurred to focus on the girls.
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wow, major change in asmodai, at least at the start.
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Asmodai got some of the most major changes in the redo, YEAH~
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Ehhhhhhhkinda sorta, he's a bit of a coward. Then again, a lot of demons are.
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no kidding. and a lot of bravado to cover it up. ame seems to have some courage, some.
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Some, but far from fearless!
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yeah, just comparing her to a very low baseline.
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ah i am slightly confused but hopefully it'll clear up.
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everything, just need to reread what's going on mostly.
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