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edit: Thanks to the wonderful advice of *VividIllustrator I managed to improve the background, I like it much better this way. Thanks again, my dear
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My contest entry for This is his OC Pendraia, do not use without permission... take part in his contest instead
!I'm... done?
Background is crappy and sloppy as always ... I'm absolutely taking your critiques and advices to heart, so I spend some more time at the background and tried to make her clothing and skin reflect the pale shade of green of the surrounding.
As you probably noticed, I've got a strange inclination to add mist to my pics... maybe cause it gives some nice atmosphere and you don't have to draw so much background LOL
I tried to pimp up her staff, dunno if I succeeded but I kinda like it. Even if it's totally askew, but I suck at drawing straight lines
...Please watch her face, I spend so much time at it T___T
I hope you'll enjoy the pic.
Advice and constructive criticism is very much appreciated, as always!
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the backgrounds fine! its really good, don't worry about it
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Loved the shadows, good work! ^^
Did you purposely make her pose inclined, to make it looks like she's falling?
I'm asking that because I'm the kind of person that have a bit of trouble to do the character laying in the groun in a good position XD
And the background is amazing!
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Thanks a lot! Actually I didn't think that much about the pose, so she's in a quite awkward position, you're right
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You're welcome! ^^
(and I also do that lots of times! XD )
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The background is awesome. Her outfit is great as well. Really well done
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This is so great! Amazing drawing and interesting character.
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Thanks a lot, credits for the character design go to
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Thanks! I spend most of the time on her face, to be honest, so I'm glad you like it!
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I like how you did her face expressions and hair.
Keep it up
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Love the hair, really, and the pearls in the staff. You've obviously got a good understanding of light and anatomy as well.
What could you improove in? Gravity, she looks weightless in the bad way, shamefuly books wont help you there as drawings have no weight so you've gotta go to the park and draw how people stand, sit, run, etc. That's the only way you can really get to understand gravity and make great pictures into awesome pictures by adding it
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You're absolutely right about the gravity, she's kinda floating in the air!! I actually didn't pay attention to that fact but I really should work on that.
Thanks for your kind word and advice, I appreciate it a lot 
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This looks wonderful finished! I love the background! It looks really nice with her. Her face is so pretty and the pose is nice too.
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Thanks sooo much, I'm glad you like the bg! I had to redo it, but I'm really happy how it turned out. The pose is a bit superficial, I admit, but hey, as long as you like it ... 
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***Amazing as Always. lmao yeah that mist effect is great if you're lazy
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Why, thanks dude
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thaaaaanks ^__^ also for the fav
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Tha background id NOT sloppy 
The shading of her skin is beautifully done, hun
You've improved so much!
I love the pearls around her staff, it's a really nice detail ^^ I also think it's a really cool pose, she is kinda floating^^
*kisses on it* GREAT work!
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Thank you, I actually tried to make her look kinda magical, elegant, like she's moving
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*.* That is amazing! The background, the pose, the pretty hair and the light. I can see you get better every time you pose something. Wow. Oh, and I love how you've done the beads around her staff
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Thanks so much, my dear, it's great to hear you think so
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Wooow, you're definitely improving and this picture is awesome. ^^ The background is really beautiful, I love it! Good luck!
I still can't finish mine... I have no time at all. /cry
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Thanks so much, my dear. It's great to hear you think I'm improving. I bet your pic will be awesome, so just relax, I bet the time you need will come
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She's really beautiful, and her face came out so great!
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Thanks so much ^_^ I'm glad you noticed her face!
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You're welcome! Well, I couldn't have missed it, and ayway, in the descript u said you put a lot of effort in it . Very beautiful, again.
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Her face looks beautiful, it was worth the time you spent on it. What I like even more, is the shadings on her clothes - it's such a nice blue! Good job
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Thanks a lot! I'm a bit surprised that you prefer the shading of the clothing over her face, but I feel kinda flattered
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I hope you didn't get me wrong. I really appreciate your great work on her face. You improved a lot! But I am always captivated by those bright colors and the shadings 'cause that's what troubles me most
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Jeeeze girl you are blowing me out of the water such fluid lines it must be awesome to do such great work real improvements, WOW As I have stated before I love the new duds and yes she is quite beauiful. Good job. I can't see green LOL Colorblind.
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I'm glad you like it ^_^ Thanks for your kind support!
Never mind about not seeing green, there are much prettier colors
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