HOME | DD

Burksaurus [2020-05-14 13:21:54 +0000 UTC]

I'm really enjoying the story. There's no dialogue since the characters rely on their actions and emotions

👍: 0 ⏩: 0

Sir-Jayke [2012-02-08 04:10:18 +0000 UTC]

I've looked over all of these and I must say I did quite enjoy, considering it's just something out of your sketch book.

The colour scheme and style are simple but vivid, overall very pleasant to look at. The character designs are a bit generic but they work. Nothing too flashy or original but again, it's pleasing to look at.

I like how you tell the story with no dialogue, all just images. It's not something that's never been done before, but it is something that's not done enough. Everything is told using your art, dialogue doesn't get in the way, ever.

The overall set up is a bit bland. A strong male hero and a defenceless woman that he protects. I feel like we have moved past that kind of stuff as a society, rather you just pigeon hole the characters into predefined, stereotypical gender roles. Remember when creating comics it's not all about the art, you need to have a good story as well.

Overall it was definitely interesting, make no mistake. I'm actually a little upset that you seem to have stopped doing these, having not updated the series since November. Shame.

👍: 0 ⏩: 1