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Tigueron — My Final Goodbye (Poem)
Published: 2013-03-17 02:48:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 3786; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 13
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This, as you can tell was the in the beginning of the whole ordeal a while back, it was really just pouring out what was in me, so that I could breathe. Writing can be therapeautic! I'll probably try and put these related poems into order so that you can see the change as God takes over
. Thanks again for any feedback and taking the time to read these works. God bless!
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i had that same trouble with my "friends" but i never could say goodbye to them even it they were never really my friends
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I'm so sorry! I understand what you mean kind of. I was friends with people who weren't really my friends.
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this is great. i hope things'll get better for you
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I hate goodbyes. 
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Thank you so much! May you be led to make the right choice.
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Thank you. I hope so.
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Wow, lots of emotion! I hope it is therapeutic for you and I hope that it helps others too! Thank you for sharing it with us and I wish you the best!
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Thank you for your feed back and good wishes!
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Beautifully said, and I could say it no better.
The worst part about falling in love is when it isn't really there to catch you. I will keep to this poem's reminder...and...my own recent experience, always close.
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yes my ex is like this. Constantly in denial of her role in the end of our relationship, her lies and betryal. My love was real. She can't face up to that itwas her that ruined something beautiful.Or was it? Doesn't really matter. Why keep dwelling on it? It's gone. Dead. Over. Never coming back. And in hindsite,with all I know about her lies. Not only was it not that great, it was the most hurtful thing that ever happened to me. There, that's my therapy
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I realized the same, some people carry around the same spirit, which influences the same behavior. It really is uncanny when you hear someone else's story and can't help but think, wow, that's exactly how it was for me! Hard lessons will enable us to live stronger, once we choose to let go. When a muscle heals from its tears, it grows back stronger and more resistant, so to is the heart
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"I hope you remember the love that I gave
That you realize love isn't a game
That's its extremely hard to find
And that in the end you truly regret giving me away."
Best part of the whole thing!
I love this one. Tons of emotion and I can say I know exactly how you feel....
You are also right about writing be therapeutic, sometimes it helps a lot. I've been through the same thing that you are talking about her and regular writing never really worked for me. Poetry was the only thing that made me feel better, even if it was only for the time I was writing it.
Hope things get better for you.
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Yes, things are better, this was a while back. God was and is faithful. Thanks for your feedback, very much appreciated.
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Amazing! I can relate to it .Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem
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Thank you! Just as you can relate in the struggle, I know that you will also relate to the victory!
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This is powerful, man--very powerful indeed.
Let all the pain go--and let God take-and-dispose of it.
Peace be to you!
--RKJ
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Thank so much! God is faithful! God bless you!
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Oooooo man this is awsome!! You seem to have put a lot of emotion into this, and I'm glad you did. I love the rhyming pattern and the story it tells. Well done!!
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