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Published: 2011-09-25 07:53:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 5753; Favourites: 60; Downloads: 12
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Description Setting: This short story takes place in Ratchet & Clank All 4 One. The foursome has stopped for the night in a clearing of the forest they traversed through. The fire they made didn't last long as strong wind gusts gradually swallowed up any hope for warmth. Clank and Qwark fell asleep with ease but Ratchet's small body needed warmth. He hunched over the small, pitiful fire as Nefarious pondered him from a distance.

Not So Rotten

The robot stared intently at the shivering lombax.

It had only been twenty minutes since the fire went out but the oncoming wind gusts and frost cradled Ratchet's small body as he struggled to keep warm.

Dr Nefarious kept his opticals fixated on Ratchet. He hadn't felt coldness for quite a long time now but he remembered all too well what it felt like. Ratchet couldn't stop himself from shaking vigorously as the icy wind swept through his fur. He had no idea the doctor was glaring at him from the far left of the once-lit fire.

Ratchet coughed. The burnt out ashes in the fire heap lifted up into the air from the force. The nimble wind carried it off into the frost-stricken night. He gazed over at Qwark and Clank who were deep in sleep to the North-East of the fire. Ratchet sniffed as the temperature was making his nose run.

Nefarious could feel all but pity for the poorly creature as he shifted his body so his head was facing away from the sight of the freezing lombax. Honestly he couldn't care less about the shivering rat, afterall, next to Qwark, Ratchet was Nefarious' biggest enemy and even know Nefarious had to now work alongside him it didn't change his feelings towards him.

With the top half of his body pressed against a large tree Nefarious folded his arms and closed his eyes.

Ratchet prayed in silence as Nefarious drifted off…

**********+-o-+*********

It was only an hour later that Nefarious awoke from being nudged by a certain someone.

Words whispered through the wind, "Nefarious, I'm sorry to bother you but I can't wake up Qwark and I can't deactivate Clank's sleep mode. I was wondering if by any chance you could help me find a way to keep warm?"

It was Ratchet. His fur wet with frost. His ears drooped. His eyes squinted and red. His body shaking as he hunched over holding his abdomen. He was sitting on the ground about 4 feet away from Nefarious.

Stupid twit. The bitterness that Nefarious felt was similar to a lemon's tang. His glare portrayed his hatred towards the lombax. Ratchet's eyes glimmered back full of hope of a chance that Nefarious would be understanding of Ratchet's dire situation.
He wasn't.

"Excuse me space rat, but I'm obviously having a nightmare," Nefarious remarked sourly with a fixed lowered brow. Ratchet's ears drooped even more as Nefarious turned his back on him and shifted his weight against the tree.

An elapse of thirty seconds went by then Ratchet enquired a second time.
"Well…could you maybe…at least help me wake up Qwark?"

With a growl Nefarious sat up and reached for his side. He pulled out a combustor and, ignoring Ratchet's expression of horror, aimed it at Qwark.

Ratchet's reaction was almost faster than his initial thought of reacting.

"DON'T BE SO STUPID!" Ratchet immediately grabbed the gun and Nefarious' arm pulling both down to the ground. Ratchet gave Nefarious a threatening glare and sighed heavily; his breathing laboured.

Nefarious felt Ratchet's wet fur as he grasped both Nefarious' arm and his gun.

Nefarious was getting annoyed and hated the fact that his sworn enemy was trying to get help from him. Angst swelled inside of him. How could this rotten creature, the one who foiled the very triumph of Nefarious' plans, be pleading for assistance? It made Nefarious' bitterness curdle. He couldn't contain his angst anymore.

"Fine!" Nefarious pulled back his arm and gun from Ratchet's grasp, "because there is no way that I would ever help you! Did you honestly think there would be a chance in this galaxy? I couldn't care less if you are cold or wet or sad; you aren't my friend. Just because I have to tag along with you doesn't mean we are allies! I despise this situation even more than the failure you make of me! To be honest, I'm starting to hate you even more than Qwark!  You mean nothing to me and that's never going to change!"

He then retreated back to his position against the tree; arms folded and legs bent up against himself, facing away from Ratchet.

Nefarious felt no remorse.

No pity.

No guilt.

No shame.

He regretted nothing he just said.

Nothing at all.

But suddenly.

He did feel something.

At first it was the eerie tug of Ratchet's eyes.

As if the lombax's eyes were fixated on the robot.

Nefarious felt a cold ominous feeling inside of him. He had never felt such a feeling before.

"I…I…I was hoping you…would…maybe…" Ratchet's husky whisper broke apart and he fell silent.

Ratchet's voice, so sickly and desperate, touched Nefarious' hard outer shell. It made him so still. So motionless. So numb. He couldn't take this feeling anymore. This feeling…of remorse?...guilt?...shame?....what was it? Nefarious clenched his fists; it was like the feeling was draining him of his life. He wanted it gone!

Ratchet's tired gaze met with Nefarious' alarmed eyes as Nefarious sat up from his position. Ratchet felt hope surge through him as they both sat across from each other on the hoarfrost. Both robot and lombax stared at each other both not knowing what to say. Nefarious felt he had to say something to Ratchet; but what? Of course something that would get rid of this suffocating feeling that lay deep inside of him. Ratchet held onto the possibility that maybe, just maybe, Nefarious would help him. He awaited some sort of response from the doctor.

"…this tree stands out of the wind's path," Nefarious' voice broke the silence.

Ratchet listened attentively with the wind tugging at his ears.

"…it's the only thing that would keep you from freezing…"

Nefarious could see the hopefulness and despair in the lombax's large green eyes.

He took a breath then finished, "You could…you could sleep next to me… if you want…"
With that he looked away from Ratchet's face as if remorse took over him. But the depressing feeling he felt earlier…was gone.

Ratchet felt happiness glide through his bones. He smiled; only a small smile, but big enough for Nefarious to notice in the corner of his broken gaze.

"You don't know how much I appreciate that Nefarious, "Ratchet's words stumbled together, "….thank you."

Nefarious didn't reply. He couldn't reply because he didn't know what to say.

Ratchet then crept closer to Nefarious and positioned himself against the tree. Nefarious was right, the wind was a lot less turbulent. Ratchet felt the inner warmth of the tree and the dryness of the bark. He looked over at Nefarious who was now positioning himself for sleep once again. The funny thing was Ratchet somehow trusted Nefarious not to do something devious while he slept beside him. It was a new feeling for Ratchet and he liked it.

"Goodnight," Ratchet whispered.

Still lost for words Nefarious replied with a small "hmm".

They slept back to back till morning.
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Comments: 38

ShadowTheHedghogZ [2015-11-20 05:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh after the story I was almost about to cry (not really) because I thought this was a ratchet x nefarious, then I read the description and I sighed. But despite the fact that nefarious hadn't had the different feeling before, it was a great story. Nice job!

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ArtistTiger [2015-09-27 20:13:02 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwww...

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TotallyDeviantLisa [2015-05-19 21:18:38 +0000 UTC]

Amazing character development!

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HedgeCatDragonix [2014-09-30 23:38:33 +0000 UTC]

Eeeee omg... ;w; <333

Finally a story based on JUST Nefy and Ratchet C: S'PERFECT.

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creepyspyro [2013-12-06 01:23:00 +0000 UTC]

awww neffy

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Ghostbusterlover [2013-04-23 21:28:16 +0000 UTC]

D'awww. So sweet, and a nice spot-on for the characters. I especially liked Nefarious' usual attempt at shooting Quark. XD I like this kind of relationship going on without any slash pairings. Also nice to see another soft side from the doctor just like he'd shown in the video games considering, after all, he's been a "squishie" himself once. Splendid work! ^_^ (Oh, and the game A4O is very enjoyable! It's my second favorite next to "A Crack in Time".)

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Never-Ending-Donkey [2011-09-29 03:43:08 +0000 UTC]

As someone who's only played demos of the games this is based on, I still thought this was a great piece of character study.

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theSFRB In reply to Never-Ending-Donkey [2011-09-29 05:21:41 +0000 UTC]

WOW THANX! 8D

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SoaringPikachu [2011-09-26 19:33:26 +0000 UTC]

So so so CUTE!! This story show the characters spot on and shows that Neffy isn't that bad of a guy aww and cute little frezeeing Ratchet!

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theSFRB In reply to SoaringPikachu [2011-09-27 10:01:57 +0000 UTC]

8D
THANKYOOOOOOUUUUUU 8)
THATS WHAT I WAS AIMING FOR
8b Glad you liked iiiiit ^-^

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SoaringPikachu In reply to theSFRB [2011-09-27 19:17:39 +0000 UTC]

Np keep up the Awesome job in writing

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theSFRB In reply to SoaringPikachu [2011-09-28 04:24:18 +0000 UTC]

THANX C=

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XRAY0128 [2011-09-26 14:04:05 +0000 UTC]

This story is awesome,

Your writing is awesome...

Your shear existance is existence

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theSFRB In reply to XRAY0128 [2011-09-27 10:02:32 +0000 UTC]


My existance is existance 8D
YES. *fist pump*
YOU SO NICE. THANX FOR READING MAAAAAAAAAAAAN

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XRAY0128 In reply to theSFRB [2011-09-27 13:40:46 +0000 UTC]

XD, no problem

and spell check failed, I wrote "existance is awesome"

and it said "existance" was wrong, when I used the correction it replaced "awesome" with the correction <_<

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RatchetJak [2011-09-25 22:20:56 +0000 UTC]

That was great. Well done!
Seriously, I could totally take this as canon for the game if I could because Nefarious was once a living organism so of course, he had to have some feelings that didn't disappear and well, just nice work, the characters were spot on.

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theSFRB In reply to RatchetJak [2011-09-29 05:25:01 +0000 UTC]

ThANkYoU c: I LOVE WRITING SO MUCH !~ Ive beeeeeen thinkiiing I should make another Ratchet short story u: IM just trying to....ponder up a small compelling storyline :J EHHEE ^-^
HAPPY you liked reading it 8D YEAH!~ I thought about how Neff used to be an organism sooooo he isnt really 100% robot xD!~

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RatchetJak In reply to theSFRB [2011-09-29 05:57:50 +0000 UTC]

I think it would be cool if you made a few more short stories of Ratchet & Clank, you are doing so well with them. ^^

And you're welcome!

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theSFRB In reply to RatchetJak [2011-09-29 11:54:25 +0000 UTC]

8) THANKS AGAIN !~ V: C: Id love toooooo....just having trouble thinking of a new subject for a new mini story 0= HMMMM!~ My mind is stuck on All 4 One!~ However I know I can base it off another game in the series 8B IM JUST NOT SURE TONIGHT 8____8 *headscratch* :I

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RatchetJak In reply to theSFRB [2011-09-29 20:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Aww well as far as All 4 one goes, I'm sure when you play the game, you'll get more ideas. But yeah, trying it from other game perspectives could be a good idea. ^^

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theSFRB In reply to RatchetJak [2011-09-30 08:45:39 +0000 UTC]

YES!~

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Linda-The-Lombax [2011-09-25 15:52:25 +0000 UTC]

DAAAAWWWWWW!!!THIS'S SOOOOOOOOOO CUTEEEEEEEE !!!You're a great writer !I love your stories !

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theSFRB In reply to Linda-The-Lombax [2011-09-27 10:03:54 +0000 UTC]

FFFWAGFTYFAYBUGVBGHVGHAV THANKYOOOOOOU!!!!!! xD Im so happy 8) Youv motivated me to write more Cx ~ Feel speshaaaalll

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Linda-The-Lombax In reply to theSFRB [2011-09-27 14:57:32 +0000 UTC]

Np ^^!Really?I'm glad I did !You1re al really good writer and I LUF your stories!When you have time and mood to it make more plz !

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QueenJulien [2011-09-25 15:22:00 +0000 UTC]

*read it again* You really are quite good at emotional writing. 8D
My favorite part wassss... when Neffy tried to shoot Qwark to wake him up.

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theSFRB In reply to QueenJulien [2011-09-27 09:59:30 +0000 UTC]

8D High5 Chicken c===
THAT PART deserves an INTERGALACTIC TOOL OF JUSTICE AWARD! *throws spanner at Qwark*

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Ruskett [2011-09-25 14:06:51 +0000 UTC]

bwawww that's cuuute c:
I could picture poor Ratchet looking all cute and wet and I wanted to hug hiiimmm

WHAT KINDOF GAME is it? o: I've never played it :c

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theSFRB In reply to Ruskett [2011-09-26 13:14:13 +0000 UTC]

THE GAME IS NOT RELEASED YET silly wiener puppy !
WIIIIIIEEEEEEEEENEEEEEEEERRRRRRRRR
*points at you*
Its a.....CO-OP game UPTO FOUR PLAYERS LEGASP!!!!!!!!!!!
So YAY-hay 8D
AND i will have next to no money when it comes out 8b
..........
IM GOING TO MAKE MY FRIEND BUY IT AND I WILL PLAY IT WITH HIM YES

Ratchet seems so huggable xD ThAnkYoo for reading RuskStick!

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Ruskett In reply to theSFRB [2011-09-26 14:44:02 +0000 UTC]

o: WEEEINEERRRRRRRRRRRR

CO-OP GAME c: like FISH CO-OP

ohnoes


LOOK AT THE PUDGY PENCIL C:

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theSFRB In reply to Ruskett [2011-09-27 03:24:04 +0000 UTC]

THE AIM OF THE GAME IS TO BUILD HOUSES USING NAPKINS AND TOOTHPICKS C:
YEP! ITS GUNNA GET MILLIONS OF SALES XD
:J Eheheheeeeee I Cannot waaaaait for it to be released though 0= SGONNA BE SO KOOOOL
C: IM COMING FOR YOU
oh wowz 8D It makes me feel happy inside c:

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NeonDragonGirl [2011-09-25 13:26:55 +0000 UTC]

Daaaawwww! Ratchet and Nefarious are BUDDIES!!!

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theSFRB In reply to NeonDragonGirl [2011-09-26 13:12:06 +0000 UTC]

SLIGHT BUDDIES 8D
MORE like work colleagues
ORrrrr :nina: Partners in Grime 8b
ThAnKyOu for reading!~

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NeonDragonGirl In reply to theSFRB [2011-09-26 20:10:26 +0000 UTC]

Oh, yesh!
I sure hope there won't be any RatchetxNeffy pairings from this though.

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theSFRB In reply to NeonDragonGirl [2011-09-27 09:57:53 +0000 UTC]

.......AAAAAAAAAAAH! *flinch**flinch**flinch**flinch**flinch**flinch*
;______;.......It just came back to me xD.....I have seen a Picture of NeffXRatch :I AND IT...........aaaaaaargjhrfddgdfgjnklfngfg
:I
xDDDD
ITSSSS....aaaaah xD Why am I laughing? :y It was very.....o:....i uuuhh...AH D:
NO WORDS.

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Progamer96 In reply to theSFRB [2016-10-16 14:29:42 +0000 UTC]

That would be really cold. He'd be getting metal stuck up 'there'. That wouldn't be pleasant!

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NeonDragonGirl In reply to theSFRB [2011-09-27 20:07:28 +0000 UTC]

NNNNOOOOEEEEESSSS!!!
It's like someone poured MOLTEN BUTTER ON MY CHILDHOOD!!!!

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CrazyRainbowSta [2011-09-25 08:55:50 +0000 UTC]

Woah! That was really cute!

Good thing that poor Ratchet didn't have to freeze.

I feel some kind of respect for Nefarious now...

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theSFRB In reply to CrazyRainbowSta [2011-09-26 13:10:34 +0000 UTC]

AaaaaaaarRrRRrGH ^-^ THANKYOU!
8'D Yessssssss, I wouldnt let Ratchet get all frozen ;____; Although 8b....he would make a great ice sculpure for my table o:...FFLP THANKS FOR READING 8)

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