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TheseKrimzonFlames — Beneath the Rage
Published: 2008-10-03 19:59:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 1772; Favourites: 69; Downloads: 9
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Beneath the rage lies a broken man,Patched together from so many mismatched parts
And I know you could surely see inside of me,
If you only knew when and where to start
So many think that they know me,
But I don't think they really do
Just because you know my name,
Doesn't mean you know what I've been through
I keep my thoughts,locked away,
Inside of a cold, icy cage,
Because you don't know who I really am...
Beneath the rage!
Beneath the rage!
There lies calm and quiet
Beneath the rage!
Lies passion and desire
Beneath the rage!
There is a soul on fire...
And the temperature is getting higher
Beneath the rage lies a cold, calculating mind,
And all the plans that I have made,
Will bear their fruit in time
The world has done me wrong,
And yet the world is the reason that I go on,
Even though sometimes I feel I am fighting alone
There are so many who have done me damage,
So many reasons I've been left empty handed...
I keep my thoughts, locked away,
Inside of a cold, icy cage,
Because you don't know who I really am...
Beneath the rage!
Beneath the rage!
There lies pain and sorrow
Beneath the rage!
I wonder about tomorrow
Beneath the rage!
There is a soul on fire...
And the temperature is getting higher
Beneath the rage,
Lies my anger
Beneath the rage,
Lies my fear
Beneath the rage,
Lies my regret
Beneath the rage,
I drown in my tears
Beneath the rage,
Lies subdued violence
But most of all, beneath the rage...
Lies silence
(silence)
(silence)
(silence)
(silence)
jlp October 3, 2008
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Comments: 71
Thank you very much.
My art is quite different from any other I know in that it does in fact cause an emotional response. Something about my subjects, wording, punctuation, they combined cause it. There's a heavy emotional impact from my work. It literally causes you to feel.
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Wow...this really speaks to me, this is just amazing!
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Thank you.
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Your welcome~
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Wow.......powerful. I can totally relate. It is like you took a day out of my life and wrote about it. I thought I was the only one who felt like this. It is hard to explain to those who don't know, and you framed it PERFECTLY. The echoing silence at the end is haunting. Thank you for posting and sharing your talent. *FAV*
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"A man who carries a cat by the tail learns something
he can learn in no other way." --- Mark Twain
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Thank you very much.
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i jss want u 2 knw tht this is one of the most beautiful art work iv ever read in my life !! i jss adooore it and i keep readin it over & over again .. u knw i jss feel that it really spoke to me,, cz am jss lukin angry all the tym ,, and everyone thinks am jss this troubled & broken teen that nobody can fix,, but no-one really knwz me,, nobody knwz wt i hv to deal with everyday in my lyf..
anyways u keep up the gr8 work.. cheer on !!
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we all don't need masks, we need illusions of masks, the belief in there being a mask at all is enough, as long as we think there is one, there is one, and as long as the illusions there we cannot see the truth, but that is good, not many people can stand the truth... (why would there otherwise be the biggest of all illusions, the mask of gods)
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So, come with me, become this maskless being I am, no illusions, just the truth, first it will haunt you, then... if you get thro it... if you come out the other side alive... you will see, yes see, everything
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if my friends read this poem, they may say you wrote it about me...LOL
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I rather hope not,lol.
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lol...people have soo many views of me...you may meet someone that will tell you i am awefully mean and someone else may say i am the best thing on the planet....yopu can meet someone that will say i am quiet or boring while someone else will say i am talkative and the life of the party...people find it hard to figure it out...i guess thats what separates we artists from regular folks...its only people with unique abilities that can present the world through words or pictures to other people...
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so much painful emotions
I'm vey glad you're a fighter
I'd hate to see you truly angry!
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Yeah, it's not a pretty sight.
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I don't normally do that, but it just felt right to do it.
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I like that you did that, it really works!
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'Beneath the rage!
There is a soul on fire...
And the temperature is getting higher'
I rly like that part
But I also loveeee the ending, the silence silence thing. Thas rly cool
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Thank you.
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Your welcome
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*speechless* amazing. simply put: amazing.
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you're welcome 
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OMG!!! I so feel this!!! Fighting the rage....the darkness .... is a daily battle.... all we can do is pray that the light out shines the darkness!!!!
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The line "There are so many that have done me damage" is my favourite.
Well done.
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That is a beautiful poem...
Excellent diction and the exclamation marks really added to it.
Great job. I admit...I thought this was going to be another "whiny" poem on the Internet.
I have been proven wrong.
Wonderful job.
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