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Published: 2015-05-02 21:37:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 286; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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I did a cinematic kinda thingie, tell me what you think of it!
Listen to it on Soundcloud: soundcloud.com/thepal/interven…
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i think the grain in the background seperates the person too much from the background.
You can clearly see that it is photoshoped in.
And i think that the title is a bit unspectacular.
it's right in the center of the picture (height-wise)
Maybe you could place it so that it looks more dynamic.
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You're right about the grain, I havn't noticed it before now. But now that you're mentioning it, it's pretty clear.
And about the title, I think I'll move the model abit, and then the title up right so it's in the rule of thirds, I'll check up on it when that time comes.
I'll make up a retouch of this pic by the end of the week.
Thanks alot for the constructive critism, means the world to me!
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And i'm pretty amazed that you can take criticism so well
That's not something you see every day
have a nice one!
looking forward to your retouched work
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Hah, critism isn't anything you see everyday around here, so you gotta take what you get!
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Once i wrote a comment under a logodesign of a deviant who usually uploads incredible pencil-drawings.
He was very very good at doing pencil-drawings, but his logo-design was not very good, so i wrote my opinion about his design.
he blocked me.
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Guess he was pretty proud of his logo. heh
Surely, if you aren't used to critism, and you go around believing that you've made the best thing ever, and then someone tells you that you can do better, I'm sure I'd be pretty struck as well.
Though I'm pretty sure that you mean it to get the best of out people, or/and to come with your insight. For that, I can only react with respect and an open mind.
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