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Description Admiral's log, February 17, 2161. My first mission as a flag officer is a bittersweet one. I am to bring Enterprise home, to be decommissionned. For ten years, Enterprise was my home. Not just an assignment, not just a tool of our mission... she was a home for all of us. Most of our family have already left the nest. Maybe it's time for me to move on just as well. Yet I feel that this is not the end... it's a new beginning. Coalition talks are going nicely, something big is coming. A more perfect union for a more perfect future. All I hope for is that the world'll remember that at the forefront of the future, there was a small ship that boldly went where no Human has gone before. This is the final entry of Jonathan Archer, commanding officer of the starship Enterprise.



Enterprise returned to Earth on February 17, 2161. A few months later, the United Federation of Planets was charted. This great union continues to grow, bound for the future.

Jonathan Archer was appointed Admiral and Chief of Starfleet Outbound Missions. He married Hoshi Sato a few years later, something that came as a great surprise to the old NX-01 crew. Archer later said that it was a surprise for them as well. Hoshi continuted to develop the Linguacode Matrix, her efforts earned her both the Nobel Prize and the Zee Magnees Prize. Jonathan later moved toward politics, becoming Federation President in 2185. He lived long enough to see the launch of the first Federation starship named Enterprise, commissionned under the number NCC-1701.

Trip Tucker remained the Captain of Intrepid throughout the remainder of his Starfleet carreer. After the NV class was phased out, he resigned his commission and continued his life as a civilian engineer. Many of his designs were implemented in future starship generations, including the venerable Constitution class. Trip married T'Pol and the two moved to her ancestral home on Vulcan.

T'Pol was appointed Captain of Endeavour NX-06, soon to be re-commissioned as USS Endeavour NCC-06, one of the two surviving NX class starships. Her exploration and diplomatic missions helped to define the methodology of the new Federation Starfleet. After her marriage to Trip Tucker, she remained on Starfleet's reserve roster.Β  They had two children, T'Mir and Lorian.

Malcolm Reed was appointed the Captain of the USS Pioneer. He played a crucial role in what became known as the Great Integration, the largest sharing of technology in known history. The Pioneer's advancements with Vulcan, Andorian and Tellarite technology paved the way of newer ship designs. Malcolm was later given command of the USS Samsara, the second Bellflower class explorer.

Travis Mayweather served as Reed's first officer before being given his own ship, the freshly refitted Daedalus class USS Exeter. Following the path of his mentor Jonathan Archer, Travis became an explorer and diplomat, establishing first contact with numerous species, expanding the Federation. His settling of the Kanassan Civil War earned him legendary status in that region of the Galaxy.

Phlox went on to become Starfleet's first Surgeon General. He returned to Denobula to continue his research and to finally spend time with his large extended family. He had sixteen children and, as he put it, more grandchildren he could ever count.

The NX program was declared a major success and discontinued a few weeks before the founding of the Federation. After ten years of exploration and war, Enterprise was decommissioned. She was restored to her original appearance, with most of her advanced components transplanted into T'Pol's USS Endeavour. Admiral Archer chose this ship as the Federation's first flagship, partly because he felt that Enterprise continued to live on this way. The Endeavour became the first of the post-War Columbia fleet, following the technological and spiritual path of Enterprise. The NX-01 was preserved as a museum ship and was declared the Federation's first Historical Landmark. Her legacy lives on, in the name, deeds and that unexplainable sense of hope that is the USS Enterprise.



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thefirstfleet In reply to ??? [2021-12-25 19:14:36 +0000 UTC]

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adent66 [2020-07-26 09:13:17 +0000 UTC]

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thefirstfleet In reply to adent66 [2020-07-26 17:42:44 +0000 UTC]

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entallat [2019-11-28 03:10:13 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done.

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thefirstfleet In reply to entallat [2019-11-28 08:55:57 +0000 UTC]


Thank you very much!



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DarkSpectre212 [2019-03-14 02:19:07 +0000 UTC]

Better ending then what we got in the show....thank you

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thefirstfleet In reply to DarkSpectre212 [2019-03-14 18:50:44 +0000 UTC]


Thank you! I wanted these guys to be happy. Yeah, I'm a big romantic



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IMikeMedia [2017-08-02 18:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Impressive! Β 

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thefirstfleet In reply to IMikeMedia [2017-08-03 08:54:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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KnightInExile [2015-06-25 14:11:58 +0000 UTC]

I think this NX Enterprise design a vast improvement compared to the final product!Β 

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thefirstfleet In reply to KnightInExile [2015-06-25 22:37:26 +0000 UTC]

I grew to like both.

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Rasgonras [2015-05-17 12:09:50 +0000 UTC]

I don't know what it is, but I just LOVE that ship's design.

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thefirstfleet In reply to Rasgonras [2015-05-17 13:43:04 +0000 UTC]

I like it too

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Traeumer1981 [2015-02-07 14:07:09 +0000 UTC]

That picture and the text was a better end to Enterprise then the Episode at the end of season 4!

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thefirstfleet In reply to Traeumer1981 [2015-02-07 16:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Bendinggrass [2015-01-19 19:57:05 +0000 UTC]

Wow..... your work is fantastic.

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thefirstfleet In reply to Bendinggrass [2015-01-20 16:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Majestic-MSFC [2014-12-28 01:44:19 +0000 UTC]

Great closing. A shame your series came to an end so quickly, we barely knew her.Β 

Thanks for making a great short-series that is easily better than canon. It's what we should had gotten on TV.Β 

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thefirstfleet In reply to Majestic-MSFC [2014-12-28 22:06:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, mate,. much appreciated!

I might do some more Romulan War pics in the future...

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Majestic-MSFC In reply to thefirstfleet [2014-12-29 02:25:55 +0000 UTC]

Anytime mate.

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Shadowkey392 [2014-12-27 02:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Great work!

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thefirstfleet In reply to Shadowkey392 [2014-12-27 22:52:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Stargazzer811 [2014-12-24 01:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Truly a sad thing, seeing the Enterprise come home to be turned into a museum. I think Archer and Kirk both felt the same way, watching their respective ships, whose long and often deadly careers helped create the Federation as we know it, and whose exploits made sure there continued to be a ship named Enterprise, be turned into nothing more then floating art gallerys. In a way, every Enterprise captain has felt that way. It's never easy to leave home.

(As a side not, great work Mr. Metlesits, this one brought me nearly to tears.Β )

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thefirstfleet In reply to Stargazzer811 [2014-12-25 22:14:33 +0000 UTC]

Cheers, Mate, thanks fod the kind words!

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Stargazzer811 In reply to thefirstfleet [2014-12-26 07:53:36 +0000 UTC]

Its the truth. I still tear upΒ at the end ofΒ the last Kirk Star Trek movie. This picture reminds me of that moment. And Your Welcome

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Mr-Jupiter [2014-12-23 17:45:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful job!

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thefirstfleet In reply to Mr-Jupiter [2014-12-23 18:08:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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MarcusStarkiller [2014-12-23 13:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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thefirstfleet In reply to MarcusStarkiller [2014-12-23 16:07:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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TheLastCybertronian [2014-12-23 13:24:17 +0000 UTC]

Archer marrying Hoshi, Trip marrying T'Pol, and other members of the crew going on to great things. Please write more stories! (and show us the NX-01 in the fleet museum)

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thefirstfleet In reply to TheLastCybertronian [2014-12-23 16:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Who knows, I might continue the post-ENT era after Christmas

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TheLastCybertronian In reply to thefirstfleet [2014-12-23 19:50:56 +0000 UTC]

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BillyNikoll [2014-12-23 13:09:40 +0000 UTC]

just love it!

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thefirstfleet In reply to BillyNikoll [2014-12-23 16:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Ienkoron [2014-12-23 11:43:54 +0000 UTC]

"The road goes Ever on"

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thefirstfleet In reply to Ienkoron [2014-12-23 16:08:35 +0000 UTC]

There and back again: A Starship Captain's Tale, by Jon Archer

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Ienkoron In reply to thefirstfleet [2014-12-23 16:48:55 +0000 UTC]

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psychodan [2014-12-23 10:01:30 +0000 UTC]

...chills again. Flat out: You need to take over writing for all Star Trek Franchises~! [with me of course ;D]

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thefirstfleet In reply to psychodan [2014-12-23 16:08:58 +0000 UTC]

Well, allow me to be egoistic, but I think we two would make it better than Abrams

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psychodan In reply to thefirstfleet [2014-12-23 23:00:16 +0000 UTC]

I just wrote and deleted 5 long paragraphs dissecting his role in writing, other franchises that Orci and Kurtzman are destroying references to #BringInRiker and some criticisms regarding casting.

But really. Yours was Clichè, happy ending, the Roddenberry trek that said we might not all be assholes fighting terrorists in the future. Like.. Star Trek. 

the JJ-verse? Take everything bad about the world from a USA Perspective, give it sci-tech. call it Star Trek...

...tho Sulu, McCoy, and Checkov are awesome. Wtf O-whore-a?! Nichelle had so much class... but Zoe... =/ Β  ..paint her green maybe. or blue. But God. Β  Β . . . . . .shoot. There i go again. Don't get me started on JJ. =/

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OccamsRayzor [2014-12-23 08:52:43 +0000 UTC]

Glorious!

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thefirstfleet In reply to OccamsRayzor [2014-12-23 16:09:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Goppo713 [2014-12-23 08:49:08 +0000 UTC]

home sweet home
Β awwwwweaomework!

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thefirstfleet In reply to Goppo713 [2014-12-23 16:09:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much

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Armory18 [2014-12-23 05:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Old soldiers never die. They just fade away into legend...

The name ENTERPRISE is nothing but legendary.Β 

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thefirstfleet In reply to Armory18 [2014-12-23 16:09:27 +0000 UTC]

Hear Hear!

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Phenometron [2014-12-23 02:44:16 +0000 UTC]

A bittersweet ending for Jonathan Archer's journey.

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thefirstfleet In reply to Phenometron [2014-12-23 02:53:06 +0000 UTC]

I wanted to make it like this. ENT deserved a better ending than the holodeck shenanigan.

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MarcusStarkiller In reply to thefirstfleet [2014-12-23 13:45:13 +0000 UTC]

I agree with you.

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GAT-X139 [2014-12-23 02:00:13 +0000 UTC]

We need a shot of say Kirk and his Enterprise coming alongside the old NX Enterprise as a salute to the first Enterprise to serve in starfleet, then possibly have images of the other Enterprise's performing the same action over the years

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