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thebalefulprimal — in love, she believed
Published: 2014-11-04 21:58:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 0
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in essence
you are everything
I ever imagined
that love
should be.

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Comments: 15

totiltwithwindmills [2015-01-05 12:00:34 +0000 UTC]

Short, sweet, simple. You express love through words really well.

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thebalefulprimal In reply to totiltwithwindmills [2015-01-08 05:32:59 +0000 UTC]

I appreciate it, thank you

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British-Prophetess [2014-11-07 13:30:36 +0000 UTC]

Hi there! I've chosen you as the 28th person for my 200 Comments Project Challenge. Basically I'm giving comments to 200 different people in a time frame within a week

This is rather sweet and romantic at the same time. One of the things I liked about this haiku is that it's very well presented and the words are very simple but it doesn't take away the special meaning. Very beautifully written

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thebalefulprimal In reply to British-Prophetess [2014-11-07 23:29:46 +0000 UTC]

Ah! Well thank you so much for picking me, it's much appreciated (:

To be completely honest, I had no idea this was a form of haiku - I'm very pleased that so many people seem to like it though.
Thank you again!

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British-Prophetess In reply to thebalefulprimal [2014-11-22 21:19:55 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! :3

I enjoy writing and reading haikus as they're often fun yet sometimes challenging, lol. And my pleasure!

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thebalefulprimal In reply to British-Prophetess [2014-11-24 17:02:46 +0000 UTC]

They're so hard to write sometimes, honestly. 
You think something that usually only has three lines should be fairly simple, haha

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hopeburnsblue [2014-11-07 04:18:39 +0000 UTC]

Featured 11-6-14 on Multhaiku 's Twitter page at @GenreHaiku .

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thebalefulprimal In reply to hopeburnsblue [2014-11-07 04:32:14 +0000 UTC]

How cool is that!? <3 Thank you!

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hopeburnsblue In reply to thebalefulprimal [2014-11-07 04:44:23 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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living-in-his-head [2014-11-05 20:39:34 +0000 UTC]

<3 d'awh

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shep4life [2014-11-05 16:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Sweet

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thebalefulprimal In reply to shep4life [2014-11-05 16:26:10 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ~

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shep4life In reply to thebalefulprimal [2014-11-05 23:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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PistachioInfernal [2014-11-04 23:44:30 +0000 UTC]

aww

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thebalefulprimal In reply to PistachioInfernal [2014-11-05 00:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah

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