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the-rainbow-ass — Character planning: Commander and Dynamic Duo

Published: 2014-12-26 13:40:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 351; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Forgive me if this doesn't look nearly as good as my other concepts but I had to do these guys kinda quickly, especially Luxea ebcause she appears in the prologue I drafted thus far. Plus...I kinda do need some halp with them o-o

Oh yes because I feel like sharing, here is a WIP  

On the left is Luxea (no idea what her last name would be lol...maybe something with a W..a W sounds like it would fit her). She is the Commander of the Angelic Battalion. She gives out all the orders, all the missions, all the jobs and decides who gets promoted ect. She's about 30-40 years old (she's not a splinter like Alastor is, so her lifespan is more limited than his). While she isn't a regular in battle, she is actually way more than capable in combat by using her two weaponized halos (which are now called Areoles...yes, Demons make fun of them so goddamn much by saying sarcastic shit like 'Oh no, don't throw nipples at me."). But anyway, they're actually really damn hard to use because a lot of angels who use them have a hard time, end up hurting or killing themselves and let alone use two of them. Luxea and Valefare are actually the only individuals who can use two of them with such skill. Luxea is the rarest class of Angel. Prism angels are said to be able to harness Cosmic power, like their ancestors in the past. Currently, she and Valefare are the only two that are ever seen. Prism angels are able to manipulate life energy to create energy contructs, shields ect. Personality wise, Luxea is damn proud of being an angel to the point that she believes that only the Angel race deserve Earth and Demonkin and Humankind needs to be purged from existence..so she's a lil crazy o-o She is cold, distant, authoritive, very calculating and she is extremely ambitious. She had a fling with Alastor until she learned he was a demon, in which she tried to kill him as a result of.

On the right is Scylla Frost (ponytail) and Charbydis Frost (hair down). They are identical twins, 18 years old and they are Aqua angels, being able to manipulate water. They joined the battalion at a fairly ripe age of 15 and they annoy the hell out of Luxea because the one trait they have in common is that they are both trouble makers. More often than not, they'll disguise themselves as each other to swap punishments or just for the sake of annoying everyone. Scylla is a tomboy at heart and is fiesty, fierce and is ultra competitive, often trying to trump her sister or make others look bad. She lives in 'here and now' and loves to hear herself gloat and talk. Charbydis is more mild mannered, although she can be clumsy at times (which annoys her sister because it only gives credence to the dumb blonde stereotype) but she is surprisingly insightful and will often try to warn Scylla not to be rash (which she thoroughly ignores lol) and is very happy go lucky, even in battle. They are always paired together because they are able to combine their strength and they cooperate with each other amazingly well. They both have Mid-low Class ability affinity but when they combine their strength, they get to the level of High, which makes them very hard to deal with and they even use teamwork attacks. So they're actually very hard workers when they're not pranking others, annoying Luxea or argueing with each other about whether they want Anchovies or Pineapple on their pizza.
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So design wise, I was trying to make Luxea look regal and I wanted to go for something different by giving her curly hair, which I did just terrible with...I would love some redlines for that or advice. Also dat butt

As for Scylla and Charbydis, I tried giving them water themed clothing. That sash around their body is indeed see-through and I want my characters to look different from one another, so that's why I thought they could make shorts work. Don't worry, they're wearing protective leg wear.

But yes questions? Advice?

Characters belong to me. 
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Comments: 9

Verkins [2014-12-29 22:02:23 +0000 UTC]

They look cute!

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the-rainbow-ass In reply to Verkins [2014-12-30 01:09:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Verkins In reply to the-rainbow-ass [2014-12-30 02:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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kArA-Redwing [2014-12-26 14:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Val should play the ukulele.

You should totally add a mink face to Luxea's fur collar thing.  Even better if it's actually still alive and just very well behaved.  Personally, Scylla and Charbydis look a little teen titan-y to me.  Not that there's anything wrong with that, but it's the impression I think they give off.  Also they need nicknames. o-o they have hard to pronounce names.

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the-rainbow-ass In reply to kArA-Redwing [2014-12-26 14:19:16 +0000 UTC]

I was thinking more acoustic guitar

It took me a minute to figure out what the hell you were talking about but then I remembered crying when I saw that for the first time XD I actually just might do that. Luxea loves to bathe herself in luxury |D

Yea I was trying to go for that (coincidentally I love that show o-o) but it was really the only way I knew how to get them across as youthful and stuff. Unless you think I should make them wear pants or unless you know a much better route than what I did? As for their names, I just pronounce them as "shar-bee-diss" (shar as how you would pronounce 'shark') and I pronounce Scylla like 'sky-la'. As for nicknames I was thinking of something that would harp on the dumb blonde stereotype (which would piss Scylla off at least)

Edit: Funny how even I confuse the twins...lol

Tutorials are helpful tutorials 8D

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kArA-Redwing In reply to the-rainbow-ass [2014-12-26 16:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Fine then... I just make one of my characters play ukulele... who though.... hm.

Their nicknames could be Sky-sky and Beedee.  Is that blonde enough?

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the-rainbow-ass In reply to kArA-Redwing [2014-12-26 16:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Tega could play one!

I am going to make those official just so you can pat yourself on the back for making me almost spit my soda on the screen

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kArA-Redwing In reply to the-rainbow-ass [2014-12-27 00:42:48 +0000 UTC]

Tega would only break it. :<  He's not good wit breakable things.

Always glad to be of service. 

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the-rainbow-ass In reply to kArA-Redwing [2014-12-27 02:18:22 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Tega would be able to play the drum really good then. Drums are pretty sturdy. If he manages to break that, then I'd hate to see him in a China Shop

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