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emulsion2 [2016-03-19 14:50:23 +0000 UTC]
Our brave hero has faced vampires, werewolves, mummies, and dridders. Even a weird blue alien or demon or something. But now his heart fails him as he faces a creatures from his darkest imagination. One he thought he left behind with his childhood. A creature so strange he had only ever seen it in a Disney cartoon. "A-a ..." *Faints*
Yeah, it was a surprise.
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The-Knight-Writer In reply to emulsion2 [2016-03-19 17:38:26 +0000 UTC]
Oh Calypso being a mermaid? Hahaha! Believe me that was fun to write. Chapter 3 and 4 are the two chapters where I spent a bit more time than I needed expanding on the identity of the club...something that, recently, I've been trying hard not to lose myself in...but all that will be understood later. As for Calypso herself, yes the mermaid identity was probably one of my favorite aspects in writing this.
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MKalut [2015-05-16 00:41:17 +0000 UTC]
A Christian Vampire? Ok now I'm intrigued and want to find out more.
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friedcheese22 [2014-10-02 21:13:07 +0000 UTC]
What is so weird is I used to know a dude named Asher and he looked kind like the one in the story. Even more weirdly, he went missing 6 years ago.
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nonimportante [2014-03-24 01:42:07 +0000 UTC]
I love anything that has monster or metahumans doing everyday things
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SilverShadowPheonix [2013-09-21 23:18:55 +0000 UTC]
Very intriqued. A Christian vampire?
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The-Knight-Writer In reply to SilverShadowPheonix [2013-09-22 00:47:04 +0000 UTC]
Sort of. Haha! He was raised as a christian, and he always wore that cross necklace, so he's immune to the cross.
-Cliff
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patathatapon [2013-07-30 18:34:04 +0000 UTC]
Mithridatism at it's finest.
... Look it up.
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The-Knight-Writer In reply to patathatapon [2013-07-31 02:52:21 +0000 UTC]
I know what the word means. I don't have to look it up. Yes it is a form of mithridatism in a sense.
-Cliff
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patathatapon In reply to The-Knight-Writer [2013-07-31 04:12:10 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap someone who knows what that word means! Those people are almost as rare as good people!
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yoyonah [2013-04-10 04:42:30 +0000 UTC]
Mermaid? Did not see that coming.
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Maclafel7 [2013-03-13 02:02:51 +0000 UTC]
I was wondering about that cross necklace…
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The-Knight-Writer In reply to TheWritingDragon [2013-01-10 04:39:42 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha! If there's one thing that I've proven time and time again to excel in...it's suspense. Katie is a character that you will get to know more as the story goes on...but I want her to build up as we look deeper into the other characters. At some point I may even write some short stories about the origins of these characters.
Yes, each character is equally important to this story, and each one deserves a little bit of attention for their story to make it. It's only going to get better...I mean we haven't even gotten to Tamil yet. Hahahaha!
And thank you for pointing out that problem. I went back and fixed it.
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The-Knight-Writer In reply to TheWritingDragon [2013-01-10 04:51:01 +0000 UTC]
Rule #7 Bring your character to life. Create a beginning, middle, and end for your character and make them dynamic. Allow them to jump out of the page and allow your reader to feel what they're feeling and connect to them.
When I designed this cast of characters, I gave all of them backstories. In this novel, I will not go too deep into them...so short stories might be in order.
You'll like Katie...especially for her personality and for what kind of creature she is. (One hint: she isn't a normal monster).
Tamil makes you laugh? I wonder why that is.
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The-Knight-Writer In reply to TheWritingDragon [2013-01-10 04:58:55 +0000 UTC]
I will try to put them all together and send the rules to you sometime.
Backstories are not only fun...but they are critical! All characters came from somewhere.
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GeekGirl11 [2013-01-10 03:54:50 +0000 UTC]
This is really interesting so far! I'm looking forward to more.
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The-Knight-Writer In reply to GeekGirl11 [2013-01-10 03:57:02 +0000 UTC]
Aww! Why thank you. I'm so glad that you're enjoying it. I hope that you will continue to keep enjoying the story.
-Cliff
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