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Published: 2011-03-12 21:03:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 752; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 7
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Description B gazed out near the spring. Something there stroke an unfamiliar chord in his head...

"I've seen this place many times on expeditions before," he said to himself, "but...I've never seen a Pokémon like that before."

Usually, this Waterfall Cavern is rather isolated. Even the "wild ones" tend to stay away. Despite the small waterfall that trickled down, it was a rather unappealing place. Without any food and being so closed off from everything, it's a wonder any goes here at all.

And yet, before his eyes, a figure dyed in blue fur sat quietly underneath the falls. Who was he? What exactly was he doing?

B was determined to find out.

"Hey, uh, excuse me!" he shouted out. He hoped it would garner the Pokémon's attention.

It seemed to work a little too well. Faster than he could see, a jet of water burst before him and, standing before him, was that same creature that was, not a moment ago, sitting quietly over by the falls.

He felt something pierce the edge of his skin on his neck. A scalchop. Despite it's unusual appearance, the feel was razor sharp. He notice a small bit of blood leave a tiny wound left open by this odd weapon.

The Pokémon merely starred, coldly, its eyes unmoving and fixed entirely on B. The were deep, fierce, and filled with little emotion.

Finally, it uttered a single phrase.

"State your name."

B wanted to answer. He wanted to say how he was the leader of a group who explores caverns and rescues those in trouble. But all that could come out of his mouth was a small cry for help...

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Comments: 10

Arbok-X [2011-03-15 22:42:04 +0000 UTC]

This DOES pose to be a more interesting Pokémon than I thought... perhaps I ought to try drawing that thing...

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The-Great-B-Man In reply to Arbok-X [2011-03-16 19:00:39 +0000 UTC]

If you do, I will you forever!

I had seriously considered not evolving mine because Dewott is just too boss to be a quadruped! But that probably would've made the end game content way too difficult.

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Charchu-Devin [2011-03-12 23:07:30 +0000 UTC]

ehhhe uh oh, you better answer like now B! Amazing work

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The-Great-B-Man In reply to Charchu-Devin [2011-03-13 14:17:16 +0000 UTC]

It isn't exactly easy to speak when when a razor sharp scalchop is up against your throat. o.o

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Charchu-Devin In reply to The-Great-B-Man [2011-03-13 17:48:16 +0000 UTC]

well, better do something quick, trust me

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Bowser81889 [2011-03-12 22:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Hah, slick story to back up your illustration. :b It's nice to see you get creative in that department as well as your known artistic talent.

That Dewott means business, it would seem. How in the world poor B keeps landing himself in these sticky situations is beyond me. Guess it's a case of "wrong place at the wrong time"?

Great work dude, made me smile.

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The-Great-B-Man In reply to Bowser81889 [2011-03-13 14:16:24 +0000 UTC]

B is very bad at making a first impression... Similar situation happened when he first met Mitzi.

I had fun making the story. I always felt that my writing was far stronger than my drawing (and the fact that my comics are the most popular things on my page is proof of that) so I like to shove in a bit whenever I can and am not feeling too lazy.

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Bowser81889 In reply to The-Great-B-Man [2011-03-13 18:37:37 +0000 UTC]

In my opinion you're just as good at drawing and I'm sure you'll comtinue to improve as time progresses, just like I already have noticed you've been doing already.

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Wrathofautumn [2011-03-12 22:12:04 +0000 UTC]

I think you better answer! O.o Those shells are sharp!

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The-Great-B-Man In reply to Wrathofautumn [2011-03-13 14:14:18 +0000 UTC]

No kidding! It ain't called Razor Shell for nothin'!

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