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lobo91 [2014-08-28 21:43:00 +0000 UTC]
I have a feeling that Aloe can instinctively see deep into their hearts and sense it is them, depending on whom she refers to. :3
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the-b3ing In reply to lobo91 [2014-08-28 22:11:14 +0000 UTC]
Ack, sorry to confuse you- Aloe is the tangela! Ivy is the Grovyle. (Which is who I think you mean)
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lobo91 In reply to the-b3ing [2014-08-28 22:25:48 +0000 UTC]
*Rereads the comic, then facedesks.* I meant Ivy! My bad! XD
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nocara [2014-08-25 08:25:23 +0000 UTC]
oh! finally! we are hitting some plot!
Hmm careful with 237 eyes, in the forth panel they are completely teal. Also his face looks lately a bit girly
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the-b3ing In reply to nocara [2014-08-25 17:55:41 +0000 UTC]
His eyes are meant to be teal! He was just waking up from the last page, which is why you can see his sclera. (Like a cat he has large pupils so you won't typically see them)
As for the girliness, I still don't see it other than possibly mistaking his eye markings as eye lashes?
He is young though, and androgyny is kinda rampant in youth. xD
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nocara In reply to the-b3ing [2014-08-25 21:10:57 +0000 UTC]
oh! then that is a plus! I didnt expected you take into account such exotic anatomy ^^
hmm because the soft and curve forms. Earlier in the comic you used more straight line... But yeah, young and androgyny can be misleaded as femenine ^^U
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Tisserovehicks [2014-08-24 05:44:58 +0000 UTC]
You keep adding more detail to these pages. ,:3
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Tisserovehicks In reply to the-b3ing [2014-08-24 21:02:45 +0000 UTC]
like, the feeling of you don't want to stop nitpicking details as you go on cause it's so much fun, even if you feel like you should stop at a certain point? xb
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the-b3ing In reply to Tisserovehicks [2014-08-24 23:14:29 +0000 UTC]
I don't know if I'll get to a point where I'm like "gee golly wizz I need to STOP adding all this REALISM to the comic...!!"
But it might be possible! I think this is just me hitting my limits for comic pages, seeing how far I can go. (Pokemon Beta pretty much is kinda my "try-hard" comic, as opposed to ToB) Maybe when I get to later chapters and I am pressed for time I'll have to cool it down a bit, but I feel like it'd be silly of me to lower the quality from what I'm capable of. xD
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SpeedBoostTorchic [2014-08-24 03:46:00 +0000 UTC]
Why is 96 so deadset against barlo talking? I mean, he's already heard that they're going to be executed unless that talk their captors out of it...
Besides, if I remember they've defected against Trygon right? By hijacking the ship and running?
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the-b3ing In reply to SpeedBoostTorchic [2014-08-24 04:02:20 +0000 UTC]
Hmmnh, No.096 seems to not be too smart in these sorts of situations eh?
Why is the good question though.
They did indeed go against the trygon, but no.096 seemed to feel a bit of remorse for it.
In fact Norg pointed out his motivations for helping them seemed dysfunct and unclear because of his stance on not combating the Trygon any longer.
There's only so much I can say without spoiling things, haha.
As for why he doesn't want Barlo to talk, well......I'll just put a line he's said back in ch.4: "Warriors have their convictions"
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20945 [2014-08-24 02:50:06 +0000 UTC]
Honestly, Barlo's eyes make him look like a girl.
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the-b3ing In reply to 20945 [2014-08-24 02:51:26 +0000 UTC]
Totodile eyes just have those linings. I tend to extend them though, but they're not eye lashes.
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20945 In reply to the-b3ing [2014-08-24 04:00:16 +0000 UTC]
How come the sceleras are blue?
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the-b3ing In reply to 20945 [2014-08-24 04:08:33 +0000 UTC]
They aren't blue, they're rather white, haha. (you can see them better in the previous page anyway) His pupils are just large, like a cat's.
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20945 In reply to the-b3ing [2014-08-24 05:03:15 +0000 UTC]
Why is it all blue in this page?
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the-b3ing In reply to 20945 [2014-08-24 05:07:03 +0000 UTC]
They're more green than blue. xD
He's like a crocodile. Crocodiles tend to have large pupils so you dont see the sclera.
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20945 In reply to the-b3ing [2014-08-24 06:31:53 +0000 UTC]
Ok. It's been awhile since you updated.
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3jaustin [2014-08-24 02:40:06 +0000 UTC]
That Floatzel should still his own toung, but with his worse amesia and the brainwashing, he obviously doesn't know how much this could help them... then again, it could backfire, but considering what I saw in the prologue, they get out of this somehow for sure.
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