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Published: 2009-02-20 23:29:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 2145; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 25
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WAHOO! my last commission! i'm free. XDthis was was for and i just realized i screwed up on Lady Kira's (left) outfit...i thought it was all one thing, i didn't know she had white sleeves i'm so so so so so sorry!! please don't kill me...o.o
anyway, i started out with thinking i was going to do mirror mirror on the wall, with this one. then i found out that lady kira had white-ish blue-ish hair and Cheza (right) has brown with blue tips on some of the bangs and i thought twice, cuz they look nothing alike. so i just decided to do a random picture!!! XDD i know it has nothing to do with anything, but i hope you like it anyway!
tools: copic markers
time: 1 week
yay for my first real action-ish picture!
characters (c) to ~ChezaFallenAngel
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no line!!! THANK YOU !!!
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wow you have beautiful coloring!! great composition and backgrounds too!
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no problem!!
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of COURSE. i love suggestions.
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that's a wonderful attitude. you should keep it ^^
Now, i have one thing to suggest. Anatomy. What i mean is that the arms seem rather long for the body, or maybe the legs were shortened because of the page. Don't be afraid to go off the edge sometimes. i see you're not from some other works, so maybe it was the angle of the paper. if you work with it upright in front of you, anatomy tends to come out more proportionate to being "anatomically correct." If there is such a thing
i hope that helps, if not, i'll try to clear things up lol
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haha thanks. XD i like critiques, anything to help i always appreciate.
ARG! you're right. i keep trying to improve on anatomy and i keep trying to get the whole "okay if that's the size of her head then that should be too and this goes there and that goes on the other but this is a weird pose" i never just stop and look at it. you're definitely right abou the arms. and the legs too. especially kira's bent one...i just wanted to fit it on the page is all, and wanted to keep it in the border to show some action. but i do agree with you on everything.
and i wish i could work with it upright in front of me, i just don't have a table like that. :/ haha XD wish i did
thank you very much for the help! i'll take it into consideration for sure.
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i'm very glad
just stand it up every now and then and see if it looks right. ^^ that's what i would do but i'm glad i could help point out a few things. you have to be careful with anime, since heads usually are bigger than the body's proportions
okay yaay ^^ hope it helps for the future. :3
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yeah, good idea. i'll do that. i just tried doing that on my newest i'm really glad you could point out a few things for me! i'll definitely think about the head thing. thanks!
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no problem!!
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it'll probably be up around friday, thanks! ^^
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yay!! okay. you're welcome ^^
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....oh my god. O.O that just brightened up my day...
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yet another awesome picture!!! the pose actually looks like one of my pictures! lol
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thanks! XD really? i'll go look to see.
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nuuu problem!!! lol okee!!
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i think i MIGHT have seen it but i dunno
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oh well in case you didn't here is the link to it:
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oh i saw the wrong one!! that's awesome,they are similar!
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lol! thats too weird though that you didn't see mine before you did yours!! XD
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yeah, seriously!
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What a "tasty" drawing.
Too bad I just ate. :3
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haha! XD well aren't you lucky. i want fewd. lol thanks!
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WOW!!
This is absolute amazing!! It came out really wonderful!
The colors and everything are incredible!
The only things that kind of bug me are that Kiraβs sleeves are supposed to be white and she also has the same βfoot wearβ as Cheza, & on Chezaβs skirt the wolf pawprint is a dark red.
And the line right through the muddle really bugs me T___T like I want to tell the line to go and hide!
Aside from thatβ¦β¦
THANK YOU!!!!!
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thanks!
oh i know about the sleeves. what's funny is i was looking at the character designs that you told me to look at for reference and right after i colored the shirt, i realize that there's white there....."shit..." is what i said, exactly! XDDD aw WHAT?! dark red? man! lol it looked like brown on the character sheet. i'm sorry i'm so bad at reading that stuff...ugh i feel like i did a terrible job now. XD
oh my god the line bugs me too. it's not on the origonal one. it was unavoidable and is in my newer pictures because i'm working on a bigger sized paper, so i have to scan them half and half...i'm really sorry that dissapointed you. it honeestly looks terrible on the computer. my scanner always screws up
1. my gradients
2. my skin shading
3. the natural order of things, like lines....ugh
i'm really sorry, but i hope you like it. ^^'
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O don't worry i really do like it
But next time you really should ask the commissioner these kind of questions before you start to color.
But Iβm not mean like that and its kind of my fault to because when I do commissions Iβm sure to ask if I can see the commission in progress *the sketch, line art ,and finished product to be sure I get what I was asking for.* So on my part Iβm sorry ^^:
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thanks.
yeah, i know i've done commissions before and have asked plenty of questions, just i thought for sure it was black, and it was a mistake on my part. it's just one of those things that you think you know and then you look again and you realize you did it wrong. i would have asked if i was the least bit unsure. this is really one of the first times i've made a mistake on a commission and it was my fault.
and i really don't want to be mean or anything, but on cheza's character sheet, the symbol does look brown. i'm sorry i made that mistake too.
u don't have to be sorry about that. it's entirely my fault, i'm really sorry i screwed up and it won't happen again.
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Its more or less like a maroon red *dark red*
Ok well maybe next time we do a commission together we will have it right lol
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haha yes i'm familiar with maroon. XDD
yeah.
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Dude... Its like a 9 dollar commish. But I see what she is saying. But why don't you both look at it this way. Its his style. and Cheza you get to see the sleeves if they were a whole other color! 
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wow that was really nice. lol even if you did that for me it'd be nice and not just for her. that'd be helping both us out. 
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Hunny I'm not doing anything for her. Its your art but I know how you can't stand the lines. If you need help and want me to edit them out each time you scan them send me the file threw here as a URL and I will fix it and sent it back. ^^ You know I would put in the extra work for you.
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have you ever played the card game apples to apples? seems random but that's what the title makes me think of :3
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