Comments: 7
pumpkinhead [2004-04-06 01:01:00 +0000 UTC]
Well written. Again, your imagery captivates me. Especially the "cage of flesh"
well done.
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MommaNyx [2004-03-31 23:05:40 +0000 UTC]
This poem has very good imagery. I like how you expressed the elements, drawing out inspiration from just snow. It is very well written and takes into an out of body exprience.
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Lilcochinito [2004-03-11 02:54:48 +0000 UTC]
i cant flatter you like he can love, and im not good at analyzing poetry but as we talked last night it is so different it is very high up, not glorified but its got this feeling of like being in the sky or something olympic its really a wonderful poem the imagry is very abstract and really punches it i love it!
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mightyevilmonster [2004-03-09 07:16:52 +0000 UTC]
holey guacamole, this is extremely well written. i think i just might have to fave it, although i've only read like 3 other poems - but it's that good. i am amazed.
-the evil one
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