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47ness [2006-05-24 11:32:47 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations are in order. ^.^ (I know I still have MY first Photoshop drawing from 6 years ago somewhere - it was downright ugly, I'm sure )
I'll tell you what I like first. You got all the lines nice and evenly dark. You got a lot of the uniform details down (thank goodness the Sylvana has such simple symbols on their sleeves, eh? ^^) Something about Sophia's face/expression really works too (that is, I can get a really strong sense of her mood). The background works too - very aggressive, very rusty - very much LE. ^^
Okay... on with the critique ~ the first thing that really struck me as off was the entire design pattern on Sophia's waste- it's way too crooked- it should be closer to the edge, less titled, and a bit skinner to match the curvature of her figure. The shading is a bit misguided- agaaain, I have to pick on Sophia-san The shading below her collar is too much as is the shading on each of her buttons. Alex I can't really find anything wrong with (not that I could say anything since I haven't drawn him yet, so I have no right XD;;; ). In fact, now that I'm looking at all the details, Sophia's figure in general could stand to be improved (you gotta practice drawing human figures more~ ^^)
I won't ask you to research LE character sheets because it's pretty obvious you had to study a few of those (good job; I commend you for that). ^^ In faaact, you actually made Sophia's collar more accurate than you think(!) She does have 3 bars - well technically it's 4 because the middle bar is really two that coil around each other twice. .....oh and just so you know her hairclip is gold, not black. (But I'm just being *nitpicky* now.......) XD;;
All in all, good first attempt. I know what you mean about your fingers hurting. You should start saving money now to buy a tablet (it may or may not improve your Photoshop'ing, but at least it'll take the pain off your hand for good). At least you're still young, you can afford to give yourself a few cramps still...... ;รพ
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Fire-Kitsune [2006-05-20 11:23:35 +0000 UTC]
whoah... your a pro....... haha looks like our made for photo shop... exellent work
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TehWolfish In reply to Fire-Kitsune [2006-05-20 16:08:42 +0000 UTC]
xD thanks...now that i look at it though i dont think i did the best job. n__n;
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ktronxo [2006-05-07 23:59:16 +0000 UTC]
Haah it's so good! if only i had photoshop...
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Migitmd [2006-05-07 23:47:22 +0000 UTC]
still freaking good for your first time in photoshop. well done. a tip for photoshop, create may layers.... i'm still working out the kinks in my method, but it definitely makes it easier.
again, good job.
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TehWolfish In reply to Migitmd [2006-05-08 15:40:04 +0000 UTC]
May layers? I still know very little about photoshop. I did figure out basic layers in like 15 minutes though. o__o I didnt have to look at any tutorials. I just did what i thought was correct. xD I'll play around with photoshop alittle more later today. I'm still figureing out the program.
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Migitmd In reply to TehWolfish [2006-05-08 16:24:43 +0000 UTC]
...ok. take your time. find some tutorials online, and view them if you can (if you have dial up, its going to take you a while.) photoshop can be over whelming to a beginner, but you'll get the hang of it. hell, i've been using photoshop for almost two years and i'm still finding out what i can do with it.
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TehWolfish In reply to Migitmd [2006-05-08 20:15:03 +0000 UTC]
:3 Don't worry...I'm a very patient person. In school today I was trying to think up methods that might work to color thigns easyer. I think i may have figured something out. n__n; I'll test it out on the next thing i draw. Hopefully I'll have an insparation explosion soon...because im starting to get tired of drawing again. o__o You see...I'm the type of person that will think about...how something works and try to think of a solution. Until I find a solution that im confortable with I could go on for days just sitting there spaceing out. I do this alot...my mom allways thinks somethings wrong with me. xD It's kinda funny...I've lived with her long enough she should know how I act.
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Migitmd In reply to TehWolfish [2006-05-08 21:22:24 +0000 UTC]
lol. yeah, i space out as well, when i'm trying to figure something out like that.
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