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TehAngelsCry — Spectral Space by-nc-nd

Published: 2013-05-09 18:59:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1450; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 25
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Description This was made for =So-ghislaine 's contest: PinkBlossom Contest .

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KiwiCocktail [2013-10-29 12:24:46 +0000 UTC]

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I think you did a great job with this piece.

The composition is very interesting. You managed to bring very different shapes together, and combine them with texture and colors. I'm happy that you decided to keep the rainbow colors inside that wheel, because I think it would've been too much if there would be too many colors all over the piece.

One thing I absolutely love is the use of negative space. I saw that in some comments you were worried about the top part being too empty, but I think it's perfect like that--it kind of gives the piece a mystic aspect, wondering what's hiding in the darkness e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

There are a few parts I'm not too crazy about, like the spiral in the middle and some sparkly parts, which take away from the minimalism I see in this piece, but overall I think this is a wonderful work of abstract art e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/>

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TehAngelsCry In reply to KiwiCocktail [2013-10-29 13:21:07 +0000 UTC]

Hehe the sparkly bits are stars x) I guess it's showing up too dark for you? I think my monitor at home must be too bright or something... Do you see the area above the shape as pure black? Or do you see the dark nebulae?

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KiwiCocktail In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-10-30 12:34:07 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I must've been too fascinated by all details to notice that... My monitor is indeed quite dark, and even with the brightest setting I can barely see the dark blue nebulae (which I didn't know were nebulae until you pointed it out ).

I guess I didn't think of this in a Space aspect, but more in an abstract way And I just noticed the piece looks like a bottle in the thumbnail! It looks really cool, was that intentional?

I hope you managed to get something out of my critique even though I (apparently) wasn't very observant when writing it!

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TehAngelsCry In reply to KiwiCocktail [2013-10-30 22:01:47 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I think my monitor @ home might be too bright then XD Since it's also quite dark for me on other machines.


Ehh that was completely unintentional but good to know! 


Haha, don't worry! Your critique was certainly useful

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KiwiCocktail In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-11-03 16:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Wow, your monitor must be really bright then!


Coincidences like that are so much fun C: Everyone really sees different things in the same picture


I'm glad to hear that!

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craigbutikofer [2013-10-11 19:59:34 +0000 UTC]

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Just one more, I couldn't resist. This is fantastic.

This is really my favorite one I've critiqued for you so far. The coloring, the amount of detail preserved, the composition and idea - it's just flawless, and deserves more attention.

However, there are some problems with how it was executed that reduces the impact of it. I really think that, as you asked someone in the comments, that the top composition is too empty. A square composition would make the effort you put into this more visible.

Maybe bust out the old source files and make a square one, then re-release as a wallpaper pack - not only for PC, but for iPhone, iPad, etc, with the design larger and more 'there.' It's not that it's bad, it's just that it's hard to see.

Again, this is some really incredible work you're doing - just tweak and re-release! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/> and keep it up, of course!

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TehAngelsCry In reply to craigbutikofer [2013-10-14 19:00:48 +0000 UTC]

The reason I've left the space at the top is so the "tail" can fade away into it, and to help lead the viewers eye down. I will certainly consider what you've said about the wallpaper pack! I feel perhaps it is a little small though, due to the resource files being low-resolution too.

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craigbutikofer In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-11-05 20:05:35 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, don't you hate lowres source? Maybe it could be an iPhone wall at the very least ^^

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TehAngelsCry In reply to craigbutikofer [2013-11-05 20:28:07 +0000 UTC]

True And yes, I certainly do hate low res resources XD

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Rasa13 [2014-09-30 18:26:45 +0000 UTC]

oh this is special. Niice work! <3

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TehAngelsCry In reply to Rasa13 [2014-10-02 08:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you Is there anything you particularly like/dislike about it? Is it too dark for instance?

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Rasa13 In reply to TehAngelsCry [2014-10-03 12:41:58 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome. thank you!
Here's a screenshot of my Nexus~ mycolorscreen.com/2014/10/01/g…
There is a lot about it that I love, and it's definitely not too dark!
The only thing I changed in my screenshot is that I slightly (very slightly) desaturated it in GIMP.
I love the geometry and I love the space/stars seen in the background , two of my favorite things meshed into one image, Geometry and Space! lol
The colors are also lovely.  I would love to see more images/wallpapers like this, but I feel like images like this are hard to find/rare. lol
I can't think of anything that I dislike about it, at all. Keep it up, you rock!

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TehAngelsCry In reply to Rasa13 [2014-10-07 12:31:00 +0000 UTC]

Ouh wow! That looks very awesome with the icons in each colour segment Thank you for sharing

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CaoChiNhan [2013-11-05 15:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow beautiful.

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TehAngelsCry In reply to CaoChiNhan [2013-11-05 20:29:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

Do you not think it's too dark at the top? 

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CaoChiNhan In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-11-06 12:16:39 +0000 UTC]

Well, my skill and knowlegde is not enough to critique your art but my eye said it beautiful

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TehAngelsCry In reply to CaoChiNhan [2013-11-08 17:06:34 +0000 UTC]

Ah you don't need skill & knowledge to critique You can still have an opinion of what you do and don't like in piece!

But thank you

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BeatStokerFakemon [2013-10-08 15:47:27 +0000 UTC]

I like this one very much. I think it looks kinda spacy dreamcatcher or something like that  
Would be a great CD cover for Linkin Park ^^

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TehAngelsCry In reply to BeatStokerFakemon [2013-10-09 09:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! 

Do you the composition is too empty toward the top? 

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BeatStokerFakemon In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-10-11 16:57:06 +0000 UTC]

No, i think it's good like that, because when there would be something else in the top, that could be too much

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TehAngelsCry In reply to BeatStokerFakemon [2013-10-11 17:53:41 +0000 UTC]

Alright, thank you!

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BeatStokerFakemon In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-10-12 08:21:49 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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oldacountitsgoingawa [2013-07-17 14:10:37 +0000 UTC]

biautiful , its reminds me on the game trival pursuit, but this waaauuuw !

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TehAngelsCry In reply to oldacountitsgoingawa [2013-07-17 15:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much Yes, I suppose the section in the middle is reminiscent of the cheese wheel XD I also thought of it as cheese - haha.

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oldacountitsgoingawa In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-07-18 11:27:51 +0000 UTC]

but i love the concept, normally that sort of style im not intressted, but this one is so amazing , i just love it !

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TehAngelsCry In reply to oldacountitsgoingawa [2013-07-22 08:44:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! <3

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So-ghislaine [2013-06-02 14:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Hello! You won a prize (4th-10th) in the PinkBlossom Contest Check it out here> [link]

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TehAngelsCry In reply to So-ghislaine [2013-06-02 15:28:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh sweet! Thank you very much
If you wouldn't mind, I'd love some critique on this, so that I can improve Perhaps include reasons why it didn't rank higher? I won't take any offence XD

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So-ghislaine In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-06-07 14:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Well I don't think I can give your any critique, I love this (: It's very beautiful.. But we had to make a top 3!

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TehAngelsCry In reply to So-ghislaine [2013-06-07 16:35:46 +0000 UTC]

No I understand of course xP But considering I wasn't #1, there must be some parts you disliked?

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AlexDanni [2013-05-14 00:33:15 +0000 UTC]

lovelovelove the colors beautiful

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TehAngelsCry In reply to AlexDanni [2013-05-14 09:14:06 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you so much
Do you think there's too much empty space at the top?

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AlexDanni In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-05-15 21:45:39 +0000 UTC]

maybe juuuuuuust a bit but that's an easy fix :3 i'd say just crop off a bit

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TehAngelsCry In reply to AlexDanni [2013-05-18 10:07:44 +0000 UTC]

Fair enough
I think I quite like the dynamic of it at the moment, the way it somewhat spirals into nothing - but I'll definitely keep your point in mind!

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