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TehAngelsCry In reply to KiwiCocktail [2013-10-29 13:21:07 +0000 UTC]
Hehe the sparkly bits are stars x) I guess it's showing up too dark for you? I think my monitor at home must be too bright or something... Do you see the area above the shape as pure black? Or do you see the dark nebulae?
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TehAngelsCry In reply to KiwiCocktail [2013-10-30 22:01:47 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I think my monitor @ home might be too bright then XD Since it's also quite dark for me on other machines.
Ehh that was completely unintentional but good to know!
Haha, don't worry! Your critique was certainly useful
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craigbutikofer [2013-10-11 19:59:34 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Technique
Impact
Just one more, I couldn't resist. This is fantastic.
This is really my favorite one I've critiqued for you so far. The coloring, the amount of detail preserved, the composition and idea - it's just flawless, and deserves more attention.
However, there are some problems with how it was executed that reduces the impact of it. I really think that, as you asked someone in the comments, that the top composition is too empty. A square composition would make the effort you put into this more visible.
Maybe bust out the old source files and make a square one, then re-release as a wallpaper pack - not only for PC, but for iPhone, iPad, etc, with the design larger and more 'there.' It's not that it's bad, it's just that it's hard to see.
Again, this is some really incredible work you're doing - just tweak and re-release! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/> and keep it up, of course!
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TehAngelsCry In reply to craigbutikofer [2013-10-14 19:00:48 +0000 UTC]
The reason I've left the space at the top is so the "tail" can fade away into it, and to help lead the viewers eye down. I will certainly consider what you've said about the wallpaper pack! I feel perhaps it is a little small though, due to the resource files being low-resolution too.
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Rasa13 [2014-09-30 18:26:45 +0000 UTC]
oh this is special. Niice work! <3
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CaoChiNhan [2013-11-05 15:25:42 +0000 UTC]
Wow beautiful.
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CaoChiNhan In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-11-06 12:16:39 +0000 UTC]
Well, my skill and knowlegde is not enough to critique your art but my eye said it beautiful
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TehAngelsCry In reply to BeatStokerFakemon [2013-10-09 09:24:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much!
Do you the composition is too empty toward the top?
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oldacountitsgoingawa [2013-07-17 14:10:37 +0000 UTC]
biautiful , its reminds me on the game trival pursuit, but this waaauuuw !
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oldacountitsgoingawa In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-07-18 11:27:51 +0000 UTC]
but i love the concept, normally that sort of style im not intressted, but this one is so amazing , i just love it !
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TehAngelsCry In reply to So-ghislaine [2013-06-07 16:35:46 +0000 UTC]
No I understand of course xP But considering I wasn't #1, there must be some parts you disliked?
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AlexDanni In reply to TehAngelsCry [2013-05-15 21:45:39 +0000 UTC]
maybe juuuuuuust a bit but that's an easy fix :3 i'd say just crop off a bit
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