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AngelOfCrepusculence [2014-12-11 18:48:44 +0000 UTC]
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Wall of Gum uses an unexpected medium to create what is undeniably an effective portrayal of the use of color, line, and shading. It is difficult to contest that it is, in fact, art. Is it abstract? Certainly. Does it have a clearly defined subject? Hardly. Nevertheless, it does seek to use its medium to portray a visual experience that makes no pretense that it is anything else besides that which it is- a wall of gum.
In the end, this piece is somewhat aesthetically satisfying while not exactly beautiful, interesting if not compelling, effective but not forceful, unexpected but not dramatic, different but not pretentious- in other words, by my account, a work of art.
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BadLukArt [2013-02-23 15:45:15 +0000 UTC]
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Is this art? I suppose that would depend on how this,"wall of gum," was constructed. An important factor to this question would be what the artists intent for this piece was. Is there a message behind it, was there a desired effect, or was the placement of gum for the most part random?
I have my own personal opinion of what art truly is, as most artists or art appreciators do. This specific piece of course, could never be replicated, but does that mean it is art?Could another individual with the will to stick thousands of pieces of gum to a wall do any better or any worse?
I noticed a few things in this piece aside from the obvious forty-five degree angle. Things that I believe we're intended in all of this seemingly unintended randomness. Among the slight transitions of color throughout this piece there are two small picture placed in this smorgasbord of gum. I also noticed a blue gum smiley face in the upper right quadrant. We're these intended, or is it left for the viewer to interpret? If so, is there a meaning behind them?
Art to me is something not just anyone can create. It is what makes an artist unique. For instance, not just anyone can be a world class powerlifter, musician, singer, surgeon, poet, dancer, or anything else for that matter that requires not just a lifetime of practice and commitment, but a genetic predisposition or natural ability to be proficient at these things on a level far higher than the norm.
Many people are drawn to art, whether they are born with this gift and ability, or not. Should they be thrown into the category of talented or untalented? Or should anyone with the desire to be an artist, be one? Can anyone with the desire to be a singer, musician, dancer, or poet, be one? Unfortunately, in my opinion, no. Can anyone stick gum to a wall and call it abstract, sure. Can anyone paint a magnificent portrait capturing all of the proper angles of light and texture, while following the rules and boundaries of each particulate type of medium, no. Art should be determined by how difficult the techniques behind it are, and how much skill goes into those techniques. Then there is the factors of intent, is there a message behind it, and did the artist convey that message effectively? If all of these factors fall into place, well then, you have a fine piece of artwork.
Creating something that is fun to look at, and creating something that should truly be considered fine art, are two very different things. I am not trying to be a critic, I am only giving my critique. I just find that with many things in life that become main steam, there needs to be some clarification every now and then before people loose sight of what the essence is behind it. If not, "art" would then saturate the art world and community in such a way that its value becomes lost and or forgotten.
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Skeleton-Boy [2011-07-13 23:51:48 +0000 UTC]
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The answer to the question "is it art?"...
Well it depends on your definition of "it" doesn't it?
This critique needs to be broken down into three layers.
The first layer: Is the wall of gum, in real life, a work of art?
The Second Layer: Is the photograph of the wall, in itself, a work of art?
The Third Layer: Does the posting/contextualization of this photograph in an art forum and the conversation that has sprung up around it constitute art in itself?
In considering my answers to this trifold question, I am going to refer on occasion to a (quasi-)venn-diagram that I created called "diagram of art" which can be viewed in my gallery here: [link]
In this diagram I overlap 4 circles - "Sensuous play," "communication," "public" and "private." I show how human activities are created in the overlap of these circle. But by my model, something is only "art" if it exists in the overlap between *all four* circles.
First layer: The wall of gum.
I do not believe that the wall of gum, as it exists in life, constitutes a work of art. However, Techgnostic's "unconscious group performance art (UGPA)" argument is **compelling**. While the wall doesn't constitute art in my 4-circle model, it does come *very close*. Here's how - First of all, The Gum Wall, at the very least, constitutes an act of Public, Sensuous play (like a fireworks show, a sporting event, an orgy, or a war). Second, while there's no obvious motive of communication or meaning-making in the gum wall, the absence of one in the case of all the gum-stickers cannot be proved. Thus the wall could *in theory* be described as the product of a *ritual,* or even a piece of "collaborative wall decoration." It comes very close to art, but does not cross into it because there is a lack of meaningful PERSONAL (private) input on behalf of the individual gum-stickers. One patron's gum does not make a real difference in this work. There's virtually no true expression in the final product. So... Not art, but just barely.
Second layer: The photo
I actually consider the photo the least "artistic" of the layers that I am reviewing. Some photos are pieces of art in themselves because the way they are taken and the way they present their subject says something that couldn't be said otherwise. However, in this case, the fact that it is a photo really doesn't add anything to the discussion. The photo is a rather simplistic documentation of the wall, which exists in real life. It's just a quick and easy substitute for actually looking at the wall. If we were to go back to my 4 circle model, it's nothing but un-inflected Public Communication of something that happened, like journalism. Not art.
Third layer: The contextualized work.
This article. This phenomenon. This discussion. It's all brilliant! By taking the wall of gum and presenting it in an art forum for the discussion of whether or not it counts as art, Techgnostic has done something similar to what Marcel Duchamp did with his readymades (except techgnostic is less like a troll than Duchamp and more like an actual facilitator). The context (especially the article) suddenly galvanizes the three layers of the piece into one whole. The article alludes to a wall that was created in a spirit of public play, using the tools of communication to simultaneously express a privately held opinion and to ask for public input. The public input is then communicated back in the form of playfully-offered private opinions. After publishing this article, all four circles of human activity are humming together in harmony and we can truly feel that we have a work of art on our hands. The work of art here is not the wall, nor the photo, but this entire situation and the state of mind it puts us in.
So. Yes. Art.
To explain the way I starred for this critique:
Vision - This is meh. The wall is not your vision, it's a thing that you saw.
Originality - This is A-OK, because even though the wall is not your original idea, the idea of showing it to us and asking "is this art" was clever.
technique - There is no technique here on your behalf, because you merely documented what you saw. And there's no real technique here on behalf of the creators, who just stuck gum to a wall. Technique is not the point here.
Impact. - This is really, really fun to write about and everybody who's taken the time to write about it is going to be laughing about it a week from now. That's impact. You made us all think. That's what matters.
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MiyuMotou [2011-07-13 19:25:27 +0000 UTC]
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To my knowledge, the concept of art its very subjective, and If you hadn't raised the question I wouldn't have considered and well to me this is incidental, you happened to see it and took a picture, but isn't photography just that?? to capture an essence of beauty wherever you see it, I like the color and the texture of it, I thing its a great photo, a piece of art!! but considering the photo and the wall itself... the wall its not art, it really has no meaning only years of people pasting their gum, but in time it created a beautiful texture, that you happened to see and considered it worth of taking a picture.. so to me its your vision that makes it art, the photo is art, the wall its not
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CReevesABudd In reply to CReevesABudd [2011-07-13 21:58:06 +0000 UTC]
I want to stress that I am not proclaiming my opinion of what i consider to be art as the only way to see this, it is a matter of my personal taste.
I think it is perfect piece for conceptual photography with minor cropping or wallpapers, as well stock... In this sense it is very much art.
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J1Star [2011-07-13 17:53:50 +0000 UTC]
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This is not art.
For a start, the wall of gum was not created by the submitter so this, as an artisan craft, cannot be credited to them. That is fair enough, as the deviant has submitted this as a -Photograph-. so let's explore the idea of this being a photograph.
For a start, the photograph completely ignores the rule of thirds. Ok, that's fair enough- not all photographs need to include this rule.
How about content? Ok.. it's a wall of gum. Fair enough, no interesting content- some good photographs don't have much content but are still good photographs.
How about emotional response? Yeah, it certainly has that. But not because of the photograph. Because it's a wall of gum. What are the chances of seeing a wall of gum anywhere? But that's not created by the photographer.
Vision: it's not the photographers vision so sorry, no points there.
Originality: In all fairness, not many people would think about taking a picture of a wall of gum. I'll give you that.
Technique: ...What technique?
Impact: This has a lot of impact but not because of the picture. It's because of the wall of gum.
So in conclusion, the object itself is art, and should be credited as such to all the people who thought "let's stick some gum on this wall of gum" but the photograph is not art. It's just a snapshot of a wall of gum.
I'm aware that this critique might not get published but still, it's something to think about. I'm happy if some people are in dispute of my opinion, and congratulations to the Deviant as it seems that rather a lot of people -do- like this picture.
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MugenMcFugen In reply to J1Star [2011-07-13 19:24:51 +0000 UTC]
You completely miss the point, purpose of this photograph is that people could debate about it.
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CReevesABudd In reply to J1Star [2011-07-13 18:02:22 +0000 UTC]
I agree on the all points, art is subjective but your right the photographer did nothing but take the picture. ONE click...
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skydancer-stock [2011-07-13 13:55:27 +0000 UTC]
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Just my own opinion, but. The photo of the wall of gum is art. The object itself is not. It has no intention, its purely an accidental process, much like nature laying down layers of sand in a river that eventually becomes banded sandstone. Art is, or should be at least, a creative process with the intention of producing "something" which will speak of the artist's mind, soul, circumstance, environment, emotional state, or some glimpse into the journey of their life. Intention being a key word here, be it conscious or not, it is a process from the inner being, to expression in some form in the physical world. That wall has no intention, therefore it is something that you might use in the creation of art, such as your photograph, but as taken by itself. Its little more than a symptom of societal breakdown. A gutter where the splatter of stains from spit, chewing tobacco, the litter of cigarette butts, chewing gum wrappers and spent condoms has about the same relevance to art as does that wall. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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skydancer-stock In reply to darkSoul4Life [2011-07-13 17:35:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I think I do, smiles, I examined it pretty thoroughly. We are allowed to disagree, that is part of what makes life.
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HouseofChabrier In reply to skydancer-stock [2011-07-18 21:58:05 +0000 UTC]
For me, it's not art because there was no thought or even skill used in executing it. It's just a wall covered with used gum. It's like finding a potato chip that looks like Abe Lincoln or the Virgin Mary. You can recognize the shape,but it's not art...it's just a funky potato chip.
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HouseofChabrier In reply to skydancer-stock [2011-07-19 01:57:40 +0000 UTC]
And I agree with you. There is absolutely no intent in the making of this wall, no thought,and no art whatsoever!
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prettyflour In reply to KeswickPinhead [2011-07-13 20:10:19 +0000 UTC]
I just read an article on this piece. Is is Art or not? I say it is to those who find ir beautiful, interesting or thought provoking.
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darkSoul4Life [2011-07-13 11:29:04 +0000 UTC]
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A wall full of chewed gums usually disgusts people but this one is different, it let us think about something. It's clearly to see that it is not just a wall of gum, it has a greater meaning. All the different gums with different colors, sizes and shapes let me think about how many unique people with different ages, nationalities, religions and skin colors are living together on this planet. In this variety of people is only one we really love, one we like to share our life with, one we trust most.. I think that's what the heart of gum and the two photos of people mean. It seems that the two people are not living together because only one photo is near the heart while the other photo is apart. This could mean that we have to find our love in all those people, but after thinking a bit more about this I got the Idea that love knows no distances, no limits.
Your unique idea of showing us such thing has a very great impact, I really like it e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
This piece is very well done and it must have been a lot of work to create it.
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techgnotic In reply to kithlea [2011-07-09 03:23:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for sharing your thoughts in such a well thought out critique. I absolutely love your ability to look deeper into the piece and notice in the details that time and weather may have played a part in it's current beautiful incarnation. So maybe this "Art" piece is also always changing with time. Very interesting indeed.
The concept of community also came to mind when I was standing in front of the wall.
Thanks again.
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13stink13 [2016-01-27 04:25:23 +0000 UTC]
i love it
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zhaohaihong [2015-12-17 15:15:32 +0000 UTC]
trypophobia
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peach-pies [2015-11-18 20:52:19 +0000 UTC]
Haha I put some gum on that wall, and I have to say it is quite impressive in person! But nice picture! ^^
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xXStrawberryQuartzXx [2015-06-04 15:33:17 +0000 UTC]
Dude,Β
HOW DID YA GET ALL THAT FRIKIN STUFF OFF THE WALL?
IT WILL ATTRACT RIDICULOUS INSECTS
and soon insects will cover your wall
so..... HOW DO YOU DEAL WITH THAT THING EVERYDAY
But I like it~
I mean, it's like so colorfulΒ
it looks like scattered paint in a unique style
Or hardened clay in different colors
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pikakingbro0320 [2015-05-25 20:38:05 +0000 UTC]
This is so EPIC!!!!!!
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Bound-To-The-Ground [2015-02-25 23:11:03 +0000 UTC]
EWW
Im sorry
This is NASTY
(I have a rare fear of gum stuck to stuff me leaning agents it and so on)
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skyaileen [2015-01-10 16:49:59 +0000 UTC]
This is looking awesome I can't imagine this is chewing gum
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AkromaSt [2014-12-14 15:04:53 +0000 UTC]
"That gum you like is going to come back in style"
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