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Description White, Red
By: Tami Cooke

Boring...boring...boring.
These white walls are so fucking boring!
White, so white, everything! It's blinding me! Boring its white light into my eyes! White lighting ringing in my ears!! They want me to repent! Burning me with what they think is the truth! White!
And I can't feel my face with my hands!
Bound in White! Even when I close my eyes! White! Its been so long. I can't think of anything but White walls all around me!
They did this to me!
The footsteps!
The needles!
The White walls!
I breath it, burning White! Burning my soul! It burns me with its brillance! I can't stand it! I want to give it some color. It needs some Red!
My mouth is so far away from this one on my foot. I balance, I lean, I don't want to fall against the White wall.
Look! My foot is even White now!
Its absorbing me! I need to see something other then this White nightmare! I know what they want! To drowned me in this!
Well they can eat shit!
Hee, hee, hee
My voice scares me, it sounds so White! No! I will not let them win!
Red! Red! Red!
I have it now, in my mouth! Even the pain is White! Hot, White, tearing flesh! Yes! The madness will end, I alone have the power to do this!
Red! Full mouth! I spit the color across the White monster.
Beautiful! Red is so fucking beautiful! The floor is getting some color too. Red is not boring! I swing my foot to color everything as much as I can. Red!
Red spots, streaks, pools!
Eat it!
Eat the White monster! My foot is getting very numb. But who the hell cares! I make Red prints on the walls with my heel, but quickly! I don't want the wall to touch me for to long! No White!
Red, glorious! Joy! It takes me back. To a world full of color.
And Red is still my favorite. I took it from others to paint my room with.
Red walls.
Red ceiling.
Red floor.
It kept me warm and safe. The smell was so....human! It was truly wholesome and clean. And they took that away from me!
The only comfort I ever knew! Red!
And now they torturer me with this! White! But its becoming some what standable now. I should add a little more to this section over here. So I have something new to look at on each wall.
Maybe if I kick hard enough, I could get some on the ceiling.
Only a few dots made the voyage successfully. But its something. Even the smell is better, the taste. Rusty! Here licking this spot, it warms me. Brings me some comfort, that maybe the White hasn't rendered me totally helpless.
NO! Not yet!
I need more time!
Nosy fuckers! Fuck! Shit! Fuck!
Those damn footsteps! Fuck! I'll rub my face good!
I want to smell it! Taste it! Get it in my eyes! See Red forever!
No! Please! Please don't take it away!
The lock is turning!
Here they come!
The needles!
"To take over my world again! Suck all the color out of it!"
"Bastards! I didn't have enough time!"
"Red..beautiful..simple..pure! Life! Red..blood Red!
"Red you fuckers! Do you hear me! Look at it!
"REEEEED!"

   The men dress i all white uniforms struggled with the screaming man. He only struggled and yelled for a short time. The strong mixture of sedatives hit his system quickly. Then he was reduced to a babbling baby, drool and all. They simply carry him out of the padded room.
   The doctor in his long white coat walks into the room. He stands i the middle for a while shaking his bald head. A nurse in a white smock uniform comes and stands in the door way. "Again! When will this end?" The doctor bends down and picks something up that was lying in the biggest pool of blood. He turns to the nurse sighing loudly. "Well this was his last toe!"
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Comments: 9

2equals8 [2010-06-03 12:38:54 +0000 UTC]

one. I remember when I was little my parents had decided that white was pretty boring and went on to paint the kitchen and bathroom walls bloody red using red oil paint. And though the caustic red walls burned the retinas of almost all of our visitors, it sure put a smirk on my face. Red was probably the only colour in my otherwise grayish childhood.
two. I had a dream the other day where a mesmerizing nurse approached me and started taking blood with the aid of a never filling syringe.
three. After finishing your story I realized that I was listening to Ugly Kid Joe's 'Little red man'. Synchronicity? hell yeah.

Goddamn good story!
Put me on back in a much needed and highly sought after creative mood. Thank you.

I'll go paint my walls red now.

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tamicooke In reply to 2equals8 [2010-06-03 16:29:13 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!! Love to be inspired and to inspire some one else gives me a female boner!! Thank you for reading!! Red the color of violent inspiration!! Yaaay! :smile:

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Sativakitty [2010-06-02 21:21:00 +0000 UTC]

nom nom nom!

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tamicooke In reply to Sativakitty [2010-06-03 16:29:53 +0000 UTC]

so you like it? hee hee thanx for reading!!

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Sativakitty In reply to tamicooke [2010-06-03 16:49:48 +0000 UTC]

YES! This story is fantastic! It's exactly what I would do if I was in the same situation.

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FeltchingYeti [2010-05-12 21:29:55 +0000 UTC]

fucking awesome Tami, you took me there i could see it all, i fucking love it

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tamicooke In reply to FeltchingYeti [2010-05-24 16:34:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanx!! I'm glad you liked it. Its one of my fav shorties!

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ra76 [2010-05-02 17:31:05 +0000 UTC]

I love this fuckin poem so much
Awesome work baby!!!


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tamicooke In reply to ra76 [2010-05-10 15:59:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanx baby! Hee hee like the pic you put up with your comment

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