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tamarazeegers β€” Deadly Kiss?
Published: 2012-12-01 23:52:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 1095; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 6
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Description As the breath from his nostrils
Flares over the skin in my neck
It sends goose bumps
All over my body
My heart beats wildly
As he inhales my scent
His lips brush over my vein
Before he kisses the spot there
I feel his teeth gently
Gently scraping the tender flesh
A split second before his sharp
Sharp fangs sink in
I gasp as he pulls me closer
Closer into his deadly embrace
My hands glide up from his back
To the back of his head
As I pull him tighter still
To cradle him to me
I wanted this oh so badly
I wanted him to take
Take all of me
To drink me in
Every last drop

As soon I saw him across
Across the dance floor
His piercing green eyes
His long flowing brown hair
The well tailored suit
Yes a gentleman with flair
But I knew, knew what he was
The minute he moved towards
Towards me
I could have turned
But instead I stayed
The predator trapping his prey
I let him take my hand
Watched as he bowed
To plant a kiss before
Before guiding me around
Around the dance floor
Then just a gracefully out
Out into the garden
Into the darkness
Where he belongs
And now I stand with my body
With my body welded to his
While he gives me his deadly kiss

I wish I could make this
This moment go on
I wish this would
Never stop
But alas I feel my life
Slipping away
As I gently sway
Sway in his deadly embrace
He is truly death's grace

But death it seems has
Has a tender side
As well as a bite
He pulls away from me
And slowly puts his wrist
To his luscious mouth
As I watch him bite down
His green eyes never leaving mine
He pulls me close again
Gently pressing his wrist
Against my mouth
As he whispers
"Please drink"
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Comments: 18

bulldog6776 [2014-05-05 03:24:31 +0000 UTC]

Its a beautiful poem even more beautiful with the last line "Please drink"

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tamarazeegers In reply to bulldog6776 [2014-05-13 18:24:42 +0000 UTC]

Ah thanks babe <3

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Lonacc [2013-03-26 00:41:32 +0000 UTC]

These words are very powerful and meaningful, I like it! Especially the last few lines, as well as the very last line : please drink ^^

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tamarazeegers In reply to Lonacc [2013-03-30 12:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for your kind words

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Lonacc In reply to tamarazeegers [2013-03-30 12:17:48 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome hun :3

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hollipops14 [2012-12-06 09:57:27 +0000 UTC]

This is a fantastic poem, but I am afraid we are a cosplay group, so it does not belong here! But if you have any cosplay pictures, we'd love to see them!

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nora038 [2012-12-04 03:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Cute.^^

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tamarazeegers In reply to nora038 [2012-12-04 10:16:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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TanukiTagawa [2012-12-03 00:54:02 +0000 UTC]

A babe thatΒ΄s bitten and turned by a vamp guy.I liked this!

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tamarazeegers In reply to TanukiTagawa [2012-12-04 01:24:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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TanukiTagawa In reply to tamarazeegers [2012-12-04 06:44:36 +0000 UTC]

YouΒ΄re welcome,my dear! By the way:I did two vamp fanfics.Do you wanna know them?

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tamarazeegers In reply to TanukiTagawa [2012-12-04 10:13:57 +0000 UTC]

sure, tell me the titles and I will have a look

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TanukiTagawa In reply to tamarazeegers [2012-12-05 03:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Them are here:
Mona the Turning: Mona Parker(from TV series Mona the Vampire)finally meet her fate [link] Also is good you read this journal [link]
Burning Feeling: A vamp story that happen on the XIX century,with many characters from Hey Arnold cast.[link] This journal keep very important information about the story [link]
Enjoy and let your oppinions at my gallery.

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tamarazeegers In reply to TanukiTagawa [2012-12-13 22:57:54 +0000 UTC]

I will read it as soon as I have a free moment, and let you know what I think, in the meantime, keep writing

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TanukiTagawa In reply to tamarazeegers [2012-12-14 06:51:15 +0000 UTC]

Okay.Thanks by your attention! You can be sure that I will still writing.

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RomanceFreak [2012-12-03 00:30:17 +0000 UTC]

That is such a beautiful poem!! I love it!!

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tamarazeegers In reply to RomanceFreak [2012-12-04 01:25:27 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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RomanceFreak In reply to tamarazeegers [2012-12-04 01:26:18 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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