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TalentlessHacked β Lynn Minmei Before and After
Published: 2014-04-09 20:18:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 649; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 1
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The drawing on the left represents my second fan drawing. After having drawn it, I promptly gave up drawing, that is, until July of 2013 when I was bored and decided to try again. This time it took and I've been drawing regularly ever since. While I still have a long way to go before I can be called an "artist" I find this meme extremely encouraging. That's probably why I overuse it!Related content
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I am,by no means, an "artist" too, so i kinda feel awkward trying to point out things on someone elseΒ΄s work but I will try to be as helpful as I can 
1- "This time it took and I've been drawing regularly ever since." <- this, don't stop
2- the head has is strange proportion wise, its a bit too big and stretched on the top
3- the eyes are bit off, one is slightly above the other and the gap between them is a bit too big
4-Β the angle on one side of the jaw is a bit sharper than the other.
well, these are my 2 cents, I hope you keep drawing and having fun doing it
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Don't feel awkward!Β You've given me some worthy observations to consider.Β
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its because IΒ΄m not very knowledgeable/skilled myself, so i can give only the most basic criticism , thatΒ΄s why I feel kinda awkward, but im glad you liked the observations
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The shading, details, background, and face have all improved! The only criticism I have is that the top of the head is a bit too long. Other than that, you've made tremendous improvement! Great job!
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Thank you!
I'll make sure to keep my heads a little more proportioned in the future
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You're welocome!
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well, think you definitely improved.Β i love the shadows you put into it.
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