Comments: 27
illinoisy [2013-05-17 21:07:30 +0000 UTC]
This is really gorgeous, I love her so much.
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hhiste [2011-10-31 15:38:59 +0000 UTC]
OOH!
No, I love her muscles. And her face. And her outfit. And...yeah. I really do like her design.
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Wynnefox [2011-06-29 05:21:14 +0000 UTC]
I think the right arm looks scrawny compared to the left arm. Like she's wearing the sniper's left arm. That is not an arm that carries a giant minigun.
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sengawolf [2011-03-02 03:09:58 +0000 UTC]
...Woah, sorry to leave such an eyeful of a comment xD Also, in response to the comment about the pudge, I think it looks okay without any further pudge because she already looks stocky enough, plus you could say she already has some pudge anyway just by looking at the stomach region in relation to the upper torso. Also, just because the canon Heavy has more pudge than that does not mean every Heavy OOC will, as they are different characters.
And as a last note, I fully second ~Salem5's comment. ^_^
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sengawolf [2011-03-02 03:04:48 +0000 UTC]
I think the problem with the right ar is just that it's a little too skinny on the forearm - it looks like it belongs to a different person who's not as buff as she is. Just pump up the muscle a little and it'll be good. The dimension, placing and anatomy look good, it's just that the muscle isn't all there yet like it is on the left arm. The rest of her is great, though - love the anatomy, and the fact that you didn't make her totally slim like some girls are. I think you hit a good balance between being too buffed out so that she looks like a man and yet making her look like sher actually has the ability to tote around a 330-pound minigun. This is the first female Heavy I've seen who looks capable of the job but has a little bit of femininity to her character. It's great that you didn't depict her as a totally hot babe and yet she still has an aesthetically pleasing look to the viewing eye. I also like the darker, more natural color palette and the shading...and the ripped sleeves make a great unique touch. One other thing I just noticed is that her left hand/fingers seem a bit long and narrow for her arm, and also, if her hand is supposed to be resting on her hip, I would suggest moving it back a little because it looks as if her thumb is missing...but that's being really nitpicky and I had to look pretty close to spot that. I appreciate the work you did in making the hands realistic and not too feminine.
...Sorry I couldn't come up with more critique, except for the arm and hand, but I just think you did a lot of things right on this one. Fantastic work!
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WaltzQueen [2011-02-23 03:44:36 +0000 UTC]
She is so beautiful!
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dotchan [2011-02-23 02:09:18 +0000 UTC]
IMHO she needs more bulk (and a little bit of pudge around her waist), but otherwise, great job!
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aeriinyuu [2011-02-22 07:27:53 +0000 UTC]
The issue with the right arm is the wrist; it's a bit too slim. Might just be the angle, but compared to her left it looks like it needs to beef up a bit.
Otherwise? love. <3
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ayuICHI [2011-02-21 19:31:40 +0000 UTC]
Love it!
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Salem5 In reply to Salem5 [2011-02-20 20:54:55 +0000 UTC]
realistic is a bad choice of words, lets say "fitting" instead.
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SatanicSeagull [2011-02-17 21:01:59 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't mind sticking my sandvich in that
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HolySong [2011-02-17 00:20:35 +0000 UTC]
The right arm looks like it starts getting smaller than the left arm.
I really like this though.
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RavenScarlett [2011-02-15 18:27:43 +0000 UTC]
Oh god, yes and please and holy crap; this is just wonderful. It's always such a joy to see femclasses that look competent enough for combat and suitable enough to be counterparts to the canon classes. I'd favourite this twice if I could.
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Gia-Chan [2011-02-15 14:44:58 +0000 UTC]
Holy hell this is awesome!
As for the right arm, it seems you tried defining the muscle just a tad bit too much. The bulge for the muscle generally is on the top from what I remember. Also the base of the arm near the wrist looks a bit too curved, almost like a bunch of bones broke o.o Of course, this is coming from a girl who isn't that great at anatomy, but has seen sooo many things. [how do I anatomy?] Otherwise this is wonderful.
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JustinTR [2011-02-14 19:47:51 +0000 UTC]
Rad.
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