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Published: 2008-02-07 17:15:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Leaves of trees so soon will falllike the nature's gettin old
now it's time to change, it's Fall
but i become even more cold
Like the arms of a clock
never stopping 'till they re blocked
i remember greatest times
you were always in my mind
It has to be true
as the lotus fades to white
i don't feel the golden light
that i could taste near you
In your eyes i cannot see
the deep shine i've been in love with
maybe cause you're with that guy
for your heart there's no more time
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this part: now it's time to change, it's Fall
but i become even more cold
Like the arms of a clock
and this part:i don't feel the golden light
that i could taste near you
In your eyes i cannot see
the deep shine i've been in love with
let me think it is a sweet lovely-lovely love but this part:
maybe cause you're with that guy
for your heart there's no more time
make my mind blank,well good work
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im glad u liked it
yep all the poem is like a memory of a girl loved but based of nothing me personal
i really like in romantic poems to surprise in the last rip ^^
if u want check last rip of "burning on my chest" it changes all the meaning of the rips before
and thanks 4 add :*
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Great poem. Makes you think about life and love, really.
-----Like much------
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