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Sylean — Litanies of the Storm, Prologue, pg 3

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Introducing new creatures, who are going to be more important in the lore and in chapter 2

Feel free to tell me if you see any typo, english is not my mother language

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Aspi-Galou [2014-10-29 13:00:14 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, mystère...Les bestioles sont bien désignées, j'aime beaucoup leurs couleurs !

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Sylean In reply to Aspi-Galou [2014-10-29 21:58:41 +0000 UTC]

Merci beaucoup !

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Aspi-Galou In reply to Sylean [2014-10-29 22:00:34 +0000 UTC]

De rieeeen !

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Silver-Zabrak [2014-10-29 05:05:51 +0000 UTC]

The only error I see is that it should be 'taught' instead of 'teached'. Otherwise, good job.

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Sylean In reply to Silver-Zabrak [2014-10-29 07:22:00 +0000 UTC]

Woops, I'll correct this soon, thanks a lot for letting me know !  

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Silver-Zabrak In reply to Sylean [2014-10-30 03:15:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome.

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