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swansistersMissing Girls
Published: 2013-10-19 00:33:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 3721; Favourites: 120; Downloads: 0
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Description Missing Girls

These snippets of girls, broadsheets, ballads,
a one paragraph whisper in a smudged newspaper
beneath an ad for a pizza, two for one.
But they are singular despite their raveled tangled names.
They are still awake, a litany of how young girls die.
Delia is gone, 14 years old, cinched and muzzled with rope,
two bullets. He was pardoned. She sleeps somewhere unknown.
Her bones whisper to the unknowns. At least Delia has a song.
Johnny Cash sang about her, the Man in Black.
Did they bury her in black, a thrift store school dress
with sweat stained underarms?
They tell Delia of truck stop stores gaudy with harsh beaten light,
racks of DVDs of Country’s greatest hits. A bus stop smelling of aged urine.
He promised he would leave his wife, girlfriend, so many words.
In a church bathroom. He had a kind face.
Grainy posters stapled to telephone poles, taped to smudged windows,
small store billboards cramped with fading pleas
amidst ads for babysitting, massage and guitar lessons with golden stars,
when they were five they won them for perfect attendance.
But at least they were missed. Others confess
no one saw them enough to ask.
“I was this, a stripper, drab and murky club, cheerleader garters
but they loved my baby fat thighs.” ,
“I was this.... coked and floating above what my father did to me in the bath.”
“He talked to me after class so I ignored his hand that reached ever higher.”
Delia is gone as is the “Knoxville Girl”. What was her name?
Anyway she was murdered.
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Comments: 28

I-am-Inspired [2014-07-22 05:32:27 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful, very sad, very true x

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FaberrittanaCaskett [2014-01-15 01:02:27 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the well deserved DD. I loved the piece and the way it shows the lack of empathy in human error.

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ShadowedAcolyte [2014-01-14 23:52:02 +0000 UTC]

There's a certain vicious tonelessness to this that I'm really digging. Thanks for sharing.

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OceanLuv856 [2014-01-14 17:59:06 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD


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GENOSCIISSORS In reply to OceanLuv856 [2014-01-15 03:10:42 +0000 UTC]

stop

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L-Inque [2014-01-14 17:50:10 +0000 UTC]

a one paragraph whisper in a smudged newspaper
beneath an ad for a pizza, two for one.
But they are singular despite their raveled tangled names.
They are still awake, a litany of how young girls die.



This is an echo of my own thoughts when I see stories of the missing.  

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wordeea [2014-01-14 14:28:11 +0000 UTC]

congratulations ! well deserved !

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erwinpineda [2014-01-14 13:22:40 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD feature

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robson666 [2014-01-14 11:06:09 +0000 UTC]

congratulations to the well deserved Daily Deviation 

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Arlesienne [2014-01-14 10:49:54 +0000 UTC]

I run a literary cafe and this poem is truly impressive. Have you ever published your poetry somewhere?

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Lintu47 [2014-01-14 10:34:27 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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NicholasName [2014-01-14 10:15:46 +0000 UTC]

I like this very much.

It's got an interesting, unique flow. 

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0hgravity [2013-12-07 05:05:31 +0000 UTC]

great piece. I love the details- they lend a haunting authenticity to it.

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pomohippie7 [2013-12-01 22:58:52 +0000 UTC]

Your piece has been selected as one of our December's Outstanding Pieces of the Month. Congratulations on such wonderful work!

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swansisters In reply to pomohippie7 [2014-02-03 17:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I have been absent from dA for a long time for various reasons. So today is the first day I have logged in for a long time and I am very honored. Thank you.

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pomohippie7 In reply to swansisters [2014-02-03 17:28:23 +0000 UTC]

It's nice to see you back! I hope all is well.

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swansisters In reply to pomohippie7 [2013-12-05 05:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I am very honored. I apologize for the late reply. Since May 29th I have moved three times. I am now in Los Angeles now and hoping will settle down and start writing again.

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pomohippie7 In reply to swansisters [2013-12-11 10:12:33 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! I hope things are all well for you soon!

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Exnihilo-nihil [2013-11-01 10:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Hi! You're featured in the greyshadow's here: fav.me/d6sktzb -

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swansisters In reply to Exnihilo-nihil [2013-11-02 23:55:44 +0000 UTC]

I am very honored. Thank you.  

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glossolalias [2013-10-21 06:02:27 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous.

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swansisters In reply to glossolalias [2013-11-02 23:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much . I have been in the midst of moving to LA, my life has been a bit chaotic and complicated so sorry for the lateness of my thanks. 

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Exnihilo-nihil [2013-10-19 17:38:19 +0000 UTC]

stunning... 

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swansisters In reply to Exnihilo-nihil [2013-10-20 16:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank You 

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xlntwtch [2013-10-19 03:34:59 +0000 UTC]

Every line is good and it's very sad/awful and perfect for Halloween (I suppose), and I'm interested in your plan to write murder ballads.

Your work is always powerful, and so is this. Why is it young girls go missing and murdered so often?

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Taschasan In reply to xlntwtch [2014-01-14 22:26:30 +0000 UTC]

Because of rape culture? Because "no one has seen or heard anything"?

Maybe someone from the police has an idea of "why".



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xlntwtch In reply to Taschasan [2014-01-14 22:55:10 +0000 UTC]

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nawkaman [2013-10-19 00:52:35 +0000 UTC]

you write with such unique perspective, regardless of content

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