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I-am-Inspired [2014-07-22 05:32:27 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful, very sad, very true x
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FaberrittanaCaskett [2014-01-15 01:02:27 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on the well deserved DD. I loved the piece and the way it shows the lack of empathy in human error.
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ShadowedAcolyte [2014-01-14 23:52:02 +0000 UTC]
There's a certain vicious tonelessness to this that I'm really digging. Thanks for sharing.
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L-Inque [2014-01-14 17:50:10 +0000 UTC]
a one paragraph whisper in a smudged newspaper
beneath an ad for a pizza, two for one.
But they are singular despite their raveled tangled names.
They are still awake, a litany of how young girls die.
This is an echo of my own thoughts when I see stories of the missing.
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wordeea [2014-01-14 14:28:11 +0000 UTC]
congratulations ! well deserved !
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robson666 [2014-01-14 11:06:09 +0000 UTC]
congratulations to the well deserved Daily Deviation
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Arlesienne [2014-01-14 10:49:54 +0000 UTC]
I run a literary cafe and this poem is truly impressive. Have you ever published your poetry somewhere?
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NicholasName [2014-01-14 10:15:46 +0000 UTC]
I like this very much.
It's got an interesting, unique flow.
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0hgravity [2013-12-07 05:05:31 +0000 UTC]
great piece. I love the details- they lend a haunting authenticity to it.
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pomohippie7 [2013-12-01 22:58:52 +0000 UTC]
Your piece has been selected as one of our December's Outstanding Pieces of the Month. Congratulations on such wonderful work!
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swansisters In reply to pomohippie7 [2014-02-03 17:08:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I have been absent from dA for a long time for various reasons. So today is the first day I have logged in for a long time and I am very honored. Thank you.
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glossolalias [2013-10-21 06:02:27 +0000 UTC]
gorgeous.
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swansisters In reply to glossolalias [2013-11-02 23:54:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much . I have been in the midst of moving to LA, my life has been a bit chaotic and complicated so sorry for the lateness of my thanks.
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xlntwtch [2013-10-19 03:34:59 +0000 UTC]
Every line is good and it's very sad/awful and perfect for Halloween (I suppose), and I'm interested in your plan to write murder ballads.
Your work is always powerful, and so is this. Why is it young girls go missing and murdered so often?
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Taschasan In reply to xlntwtch [2014-01-14 22:26:30 +0000 UTC]
Because of rape culture? Because "no one has seen or heard anything"?
Maybe someone from the police has an idea of "why".
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nawkaman [2013-10-19 00:52:35 +0000 UTC]
you write with such unique perspective, regardless of content
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