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DenDraws [2014-07-21 01:10:32 +0000 UTC]

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Since you are trying to achieve a feeling of movement (I assume e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>), I would try playing a bit more with motion blur and atmospheric perspective to make the composition even more dynamic..

Greater contrast between sharp and blurry shapes, and some bleeding of the vehicle colors behind them as they rush past, would heighten that epic racing action.

Atmosphere wise, the back two vehicles seem too clear to me. Dust clouds or haze obscuring them slightly would push them back further and add more depth to the piece overall.

I hope that makes sense? Good work so far!
-Deni

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Sviatoslav-SciFi In reply to DenDraws [2014-07-21 07:04:21 +0000 UTC]

Hi Deni
You are right. With depth and motion blur filing will be more cinematic.
In this picture i was looking for sport photo effect. They using extremely fast exposure and so image sharp as a blade ))
I will definitely make a resign image with strong motion blur effect.
Thanks
SWAT

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Rainsig [2014-07-21 09:58:53 +0000 UTC]

Is it REVOLT? *O*

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Sviatoslav-SciFi In reply to Rainsig [2014-07-21 10:22:57 +0000 UTC]

Not sure what is REVOLT...
I did not had this in my mind ))

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Rainsig In reply to Sviatoslav-SciFi [2014-07-21 10:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh, it's a racing game about RC cars c; Stunning work anyway c:

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Sviatoslav-SciFi [2014-07-21 09:34:37 +0000 UTC]

))

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blogybo [2014-07-21 09:22:46 +0000 UTC]

reminds me of a game my dad used to play loads. GREAT WORK

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Sviatoslav-SciFi In reply to blogybo [2014-07-21 13:18:18 +0000 UTC]

))

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DoubleDandE [2014-07-20 23:34:00 +0000 UTC]

This looks very well done. The overall lighting looks good, and the debris from the tire gives us a good sense of the speed and action going on. Good job. 

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Sviatoslav-SciFi In reply to DoubleDandE [2014-07-21 07:06:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ))
I hope it does

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DoubleDandE In reply to Sviatoslav-SciFi [2014-07-21 07:12:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. 

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