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sugarangel — Clean Dirty

Published: 2003-11-05 13:30:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 163; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 19
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Description In my skull rings
The echoes of the contaminated
Infected my mindset tells me
My corpse aches
Sick from the thoughts
These emotions shock me
My filthy soul positioned on a staff
For the entire to observe
To meander by
And spat upon
I require an inside sponge down
My existence in disarray
I’ll continue here one last time
With heart so exhausted
To collapse into a security blanket
Of your arms
Embrace me
Enlighten me
That you still care
Even if I possess an infection
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Comments: 15

sailor-rocket [2003-12-25 23:19:42 +0000 UTC]

oooo that last line is so different than the few before it that it turns out really powerful.

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sugarmagnolia420 [2003-11-06 22:40:24 +0000 UTC]

awesome job!


perfect

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sugarangel In reply to sugarmagnolia420 [2003-11-08 09:04:05 +0000 UTC]

awww thanks hunnie...

candy

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kittyocean [2003-11-06 10:36:24 +0000 UTC]

*sniffs* Pwetty....

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nelsmiley [2003-11-06 02:25:51 +0000 UTC]

as always....

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sugarangel In reply to nelsmiley [2003-11-06 07:59:02 +0000 UTC]

awww thank you hunnie...


candy

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aenim-a [2003-11-05 20:40:18 +0000 UTC]

that is so sweet

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chilipalmer [2003-11-05 19:43:17 +0000 UTC]

Awww beautiful

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carlos-teran [2003-11-05 18:13:18 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful poem.

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onegurlrevolution [2003-11-05 17:36:20 +0000 UTC]

btw

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onegurlrevolution [2003-11-05 17:31:04 +0000 UTC]

wow girl... thats great... the picture disturbs me but whatever.. i love the poem... you are very talented!

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sugarangel In reply to onegurlrevolution [2003-11-06 08:09:59 +0000 UTC]

the pic i think was a lil to perfect for the poem... yet i cant look at it long... cuz it is quite disturbing in a way... but thanks for the wonderful comment hun i always apperciate it...


candy
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i know i can't spell

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sweetncarin [2003-11-05 15:27:25 +0000 UTC]

awww sweetie thanks so much for everything. i love you and miss you. i am working through everything slowly as you know. taking it one day at a time.

thanks for everything you are a great friend.


reann

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sugarangel In reply to sweetncarin [2003-11-05 15:35:37 +0000 UTC]

hun... this poem is really about how you feel right now... and well... i'm going to write another a better one once i find the right words the write emotion... i hope everything is better and blue skys and all... later cutie...

candy

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sweetncarin In reply to sugarangel [2003-11-07 17:44:15 +0000 UTC]

well so far so good things are going alright. i amnot as sown as i was before. but monday is coming and you know what is to happen then. and then the weekend of the 14 i am going to the beach with a friend to relax and well maybe that is what i really need. ill keep you posted .

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