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Published: 2005-09-13 06:41:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 188; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description standing there beside you
as you held me close to your heart
your hands just knew
you touched me slow, soft
i felt magic all over
my mind was all you

time was stopped
and i felt the moment
what was yours became mine
your body was on me
i was your goddess
i only knew you

desire became instinct
and passion was all that throbbed
my heart pulsed
trying to keep up with our beat
excited, my blood rushed all over
exploding of you

my chest rised up and down
every breath was a gulp
to feed the fire of passion
it was all burning inside
burning hot, trying to get out
the heat was you

you felt me
my skin was glowing with your touch
slowly your fingers explored
you were everywhere
i just felt you all over
it was only you

your face was in my hair
as you breathed me in
and you found my eyes
closed shut with pleasure
i was in a fantasy of dreams
i only want you

i licked my lips and smiled
as you slowly came to me
you kissed me
gentle and sweet
i felt life, spirit and soul
i experienced you

but u didn’t stop
you took me left and right
we swayed along
the rhythm of our bodies combined
our own song secretly playing in our minds
we were lost in the sensation
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Comments: 16

morbidenchantress16 [2005-11-17 16:54:28 +0000 UTC]

lots of passion, i likie!!!

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sufeyfei In reply to morbidenchantress16 [2005-11-18 12:08:38 +0000 UTC]

hehe. thank u

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morbidenchantress16 In reply to sufeyfei [2005-11-18 16:24:48 +0000 UTC]

^_^ your welcome!!!

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EchoesofMourning [2005-11-15 00:06:38 +0000 UTC]

It's good, but it seems like the ending was a bit of a jolt. It just stopped. Maybe it was meant that way, I don't know...Either way, it's very passionate.

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sufeyfei In reply to EchoesofMourning [2005-11-18 12:06:43 +0000 UTC]

hmm...abrupt ending? ok. i'll take a look into that. thanx

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EchoesofMourning In reply to sufeyfei [2005-11-18 18:53:03 +0000 UTC]

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FunkyCurls [2005-09-15 12:10:03 +0000 UTC]

wow...beautifully written. I love the way you describe it. Its...hmm i cant put into words and even i did it wont sound natural for a 12 year old to say it so. Anyway, great work!

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sufeyfei In reply to FunkyCurls [2005-09-17 03:58:02 +0000 UTC]

hehe. thanx. hope i didnt put any naughty ideas in you

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FunkyCurls In reply to sufeyfei [2005-10-11 09:33:20 +0000 UTC]

ur welcome...hehe no, im still the innocent me

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Mardya89 [2005-09-13 11:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Ooohh I love this one! Very raw and honest. I seriously can't explain your stuff It just sorts of explain itself if you know what I mean You're making me feel horny again sufi!! Hahaha...hmm less than a 100 days to freedom!!

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sufeyfei In reply to Mardya89 [2005-09-14 06:04:39 +0000 UTC]

hehe. love ur comment mar. hehe. speechless. horny mar!! take a picture y dont u. express it in a photo

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Mardya89 In reply to sufeyfei [2005-09-14 09:47:29 +0000 UTC]

You want me to express my horny-ness in a photo? Doesn't sound right to me

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sufeyfei In reply to Mardya89 [2005-09-17 04:06:06 +0000 UTC]

its just a suggestion. your expressions are always the same in each photo

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Mardya89 In reply to sufeyfei [2005-09-17 06:56:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes i know that, you've pointed that out a couple of times already

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sufeyfei In reply to Mardya89 [2005-09-18 09:15:12 +0000 UTC]

sorri...is that why you were being all weird with me yesterday?

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Mardya89 In reply to sufeyfei [2005-09-21 12:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Hmm partly yeah. Something is wrong with me this week

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