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Suchiru — Realism 2

Published: 2006-03-25 17:28:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 151; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 13
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Description Hey there guys, I'm here again with another portrait, though I can't say I'm too pleased about this one... I'm still trying though and will continue so I can handle doing more realistic drawings rather than only Anime. I like Anime, don get me wrong, but that won't get me far in life if I want to go somewhere with art. *nods* I'll balance out the two. Anyways, I know there's mistakes everywhere. For starters, the lips. I recieved some much critique on the lips, and I kinda screwed them up even more... And the nose too, which I can see now the errors... And the hair~ Hair is so hard u_u I still haven't come up with a method yet for hair. Maybe by the 4 or 5th pic I'll figure something out... Well, beat up this garbage~ I won't get better without it.
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Comments: 19

YukisQueen [2006-03-28 23:27:13 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to see this one, for real not by internet. I think I can help a bit.
Bring it Friday, yes?


Oh... and free up some of your time?
kthxbai<3

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Suchiru In reply to YukisQueen [2006-03-29 04:54:20 +0000 UTC]

k, I'll bring it then, chao~

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Mira-Stella [2006-03-26 22:10:10 +0000 UTC]

Yay~ ^_^ Another. I like, I like. And you ARE improving. Hmm... let's see. The lips aren't actually that bad, and I like how you shaded between 'em, teeth and all, too. Just shade them a bit more to make them more 3-dimensional.

As far as the nose goes.. (rhymes. ) ...add more shadow to the left side of it, I think, because your light source is coming from the right. But still, it's looking better. ^_^

And as for the hair, that's something difficult that everyone has to learn. Experiment a bit to see what works for you~ .__. I personally draw individual strands and shade lighter and darker in certain areas. o_o Then I erase where the highlights/shine should go.

Hmm... I should submit something.. ^_^ You're getting better! Good job.

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Mira-Stella In reply to Mira-Stella [2006-03-27 15:08:41 +0000 UTC]

o.o Why'd you kick me? *kicks back* >_< Don't worry about the hair, it took me a while to find a style for it. And it's still only mediocre, anyways.

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Suchiru In reply to Mira-Stella [2006-03-27 15:05:45 +0000 UTC]

^.^ Thank you~ That makes me feel better about my art. *kicks* My, aren't you funny T.T; And I need to work on hair~ >_<

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Noctimark [2006-03-26 01:44:36 +0000 UTC]

I liked this drawing when you showed it to me in person. I still like it. It's an awesome style, man & it's good to branch out and try different methods. This is proof that you don't just rely on ONE type of drawing style. Good job, buddy.

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Suchiru In reply to Noctimark [2006-03-26 05:41:57 +0000 UTC]

^.^ Thank you~ That makes me feel better bout my work~ I'll try hard to get better at realism, but I still like anime XD

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Sherincal [2006-03-25 21:51:23 +0000 UTC]

its good that your tying to branch out a bit art should not be confined to one style and the eyes are soooooo coool!

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Suchiru In reply to Sherincal [2006-03-26 05:45:04 +0000 UTC]

^.^ Thank ya~ I really appreciate it~

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shortpinay [2006-03-25 18:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Woweee!!!!! I love her eyes! So pretty And her lips aren't that bad!!! Her nose looks a little odd.. Maybe kind of flat? Some good shading would fix that up

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Suchiru In reply to shortpinay [2006-03-26 05:47:45 +0000 UTC]

My thoughts exactly my dear shorty~ The nose could use much tweeking (however you spell that o_o; ) I guess everything else is okay... Thank ya kid~ ^.^

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mexicananimeartist [2006-03-25 17:55:45 +0000 UTC]

better than anything i could come up with >.>; i think its pretty good. practice makes perfect!!

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Suchiru In reply to mexicananimeartist [2006-03-26 05:51:30 +0000 UTC]

o_o I dun see much of your stuff... Do you update much? I should pay a visit to your gallery... o.o; Thank ya though~ ^.^ *bows*

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mexicananimeartist In reply to Suchiru [2006-03-26 14:44:12 +0000 UTC]

i update... i dunno... some times in a month?

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Suchiru In reply to mexicananimeartist [2006-03-26 15:26:42 +0000 UTC]

o_o; er..ok

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yukime [2006-03-25 17:47:13 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THE EYES ^^ the rest is just a bit of proportionals ^^

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Suchiru In reply to yukime [2006-03-26 05:51:45 +0000 UTC]

^.^ Thanks~!

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taeshilh [2006-03-25 17:33:59 +0000 UTC]

Hey, atleast you were able to practice some more when it came to doing faces => You will sometimes create some things that you aren't so pleased with, but atleast you're practicing and getting better at it.. soon, you will take all that experience and create something ownage XD

But yeah.. I feel this is awesome, though! Seriously.. I don't think the lips look so bad "O_O" Maybe they need more pronouncing on the bottom.. but that's really it regarding them XD And the nose does look a little flat.. but I remember when I did my practice, I SUCKED at it.. like seriously.. my nose sucked. The eyes are gorgeous, though.. like a mixture of realism and fantasy.. they look really pretty and shiny ;.; I think the left eye (our right) is a little long on the side, though.. but that's like it "O_O"

Still wonderful for a practice.. I know a technique for doing hair, but it's really weird to explain "XD;" I remember doing this before in class.. so yeah. Just keep at it and just.. try to practice with hair. I recall what I did is.. strands.. strands and I would bold some strands and light some others.. like what I noticed needed to be light.. and went on that way.. I really cannot explain.

Keep it up! Maybe you can search through the DAland search engine for realism tutorials.. like one for hair => Keep at it!

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Suchiru In reply to taeshilh [2006-03-25 17:56:13 +0000 UTC]

o_o the nose is flat? Wow~ that's a new one. Now that I look at it, it does...Blah, it hurts to look at u_u It could use some more shading to bring it out....As for the lip, the upper lip just bothers me a lot~ Personally I like the eyes a lot too. That's prolly the only thing I like in this pic... But anyways, thanks for the comment. It's nice to get some criticism every once in a while. Though I might know someone who can gimme a few tips too~ XD Thank you very much Taeshilh~! ^.^ *bows*

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