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Stuie-VF — Condemnation by-nc-nd
Published: 2008-05-30 00:16:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 111; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description My Ash Condemns my soul.
not my soul?
her soul.
it fills me since 10 & 5
its 10 & 7 Now
Thats 2.
another one?
another 20?

Why?
everyone knows why.
not heartbreak
not depression
you liked it.
i liked it.
so we continue.

watching as the ash,
the ash condemns your soul.
Its Not mine.
Bartered for another.
An eye for an eye
a life for a life
her soul.

Feel it consume you
as you consume it
we breath
full breaths of another
another way to kill.
kill yourself.
through these toxins.

so sweet are the toxins
the ones that consume you
as you consume it.
its fair.
you take their life.
they take yours
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Comments: 5

just-claire [2008-06-25 23:05:38 +0000 UTC]

This is definitely my favourite. Not because of the references, but because the metaphor is done really well. ...Okay yeah, I really don't do the whole comment other peoples work thing well but still, well done and junk. That
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natalie-leith [2008-06-03 14:57:10 +0000 UTC]

HA! It makes so much sense now you explained the metaphore! Hahahaha!
I like it.
You said you have more writings someplace...Putthemupputthemup!

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dawnting [2008-06-02 09:56:55 +0000 UTC]

very nice dear! you are a good writer!

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Stuie-VF In reply to dawnting [2008-06-03 05:22:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks )

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dawnting In reply to Stuie-VF [2008-06-03 11:01:00 +0000 UTC]

you are most welcome

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