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StormRing — This Way - Tryout 1 - Again
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Published: 2007-08-31 00:56:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 291; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 6
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Tryout 1...again XD;...I quite like it...Not much to say on it other then Ginga the Pikachu is my pokesona...And Ceolsige a.k.a Ceolshrew is 's...Or that I draw her as anyway XD;
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Good background, I find no flaws in that area. The foreground requires more work, less lines. To give the illusion of ground, grass, and such, requires more color than lines. Lines should be on overlapping things, to show where that image ends. However, with such a conglomeration like rocks and grass, requires illusion. You can't be expected to draw every blade, so you should trick the eyes to believing they're there.
Ceolsige tells me that you wanted it to seem like an anime, and it does. But, as she says, the background and foreground clash. I'm not saying it's bad, but it could use improvement, y'know? It would have made the picture seem even more impressive, had you been consistant with the landscape.
And you always make pikachu look like a rabbit... He's a rat, he needs to be shorter and fatter xD That's just me >.>
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Thank you very much :3 I'll keep this all in mind...
And yah, but my backgrounds are just much more advanced then my FG charras...So it's hard to mesh them well :3
And thats just how Ginga is...
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"THIS WAY! *skydives*" ".... TT^TT"
lulz awesome 8D Those people at your oekaki are elitist bastards if this and your next two don't get you in.
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XD; They are very elite...Which is why I wana get in...If I'm in I know I'm good XD;
"...HO-SHEET, CEOLLL!!!!' *Skydives after*
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