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Steve-does-art In reply to ??? [2017-06-03 21:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for taking the time to write this critique, it helps me a lot and I really appreciate it when people take some of their time to write one just to help me out! ^^
So first of all, don't worry, your critique is great :3
Yeah that is true, I often don't put too much work into the background if I make one at atll and it's one of the things I should really push myself to do more
And yeah, there is so much fanart around and well especially cause it is fanart it is of course not really original xD
Very good point here, that is one of the things I kinda missed and that I still have to work on which is integrating the character into the background in the right way which includes coloration and lighting of the background and character and I kinda messed that up here, thanks for pointing it out, didn't notice that before ovo
Thanks a lot for all the compliments and the constructive feedback, it really helps me a lot and I'll try my best to provide more content in the future! ^^
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TfStuff In reply to ??? [2017-06-02 20:25:32 +0000 UTC]
JUDGEING THIS!! XDXDXXD you got yourself into a war..
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HotdogKing9 In reply to TfStuff [2017-06-03 17:47:55 +0000 UTC]
SORRY SORRY YOU ALREADY EXPLAINED EVERYTHING SO YEAH I'LL GIVE YOU A POINT RIGHT AFTER I BECOME NOT BROKE
I'm a dummy sorry
END OF CONVERSATION
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SquirrelsMcGee [2017-03-17 20:19:26 +0000 UTC]
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Quick critique not gonna go into too much depth here
Great line-work, one or two spots I can see where I doesn't hold up so well, for example it's right jaw/cheek, bit of a wobbly line there, and around the back where the plant-thing on it's back meets it's rear legs, there's a bit of an overlay.
Lighting is solid, one minor grievance I have is the source of the light. From what I can gather, the light is coming from the left side (from the viewer's perspective), so the source of the light must also be coming from that side, however, it's rear-left leg appears to be lit from the same source as the face and front legs, which wouldn't make sense as naturally, the body would block the light, the shadows and lighting on the ground also make it look odd.
Colours are bright and vibrant, perfect for setting the upbeat and adventurous tone of the piece, colour smoothing is not perfect, but I don't see that as being necessary, nor would I argue that it would be improved if this was the case.
Another point to make is that what is shown of the irises, while obviously intentionally large to convey the chibi-like artstyle you were going for, either imply that they are extremely large circular eyes, which when it's looking forward, you would not be able to see any of the white in it's eyes, or imply oval, or cat-like eyes.
Overall, a very solid piece, 5/7 would use as profile picture
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theBluYu [2017-03-17 18:40:46 +0000 UTC]
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I absolutely love the colors and lighting! It gives a sunny and even tropical feel to everything. You also did a well done job with the shadowing. It has nice details and the use of a yellowish tint wherever anything is exposed to light is why I think it looks tropical. The name of your deviation adds to that too! XD The image is clear and sharp. It's not the most original being fan art, however, the orange scarf, the eye design, the hairlike design on top of Bulbasaur's head, and the use of blue patches instead of dark green all are very original to me! I also noticed that His color scheme is a little on the aqua side, sine a canon Bulbasaur is usually slightly yellowish green, so that's another plus. I like your technique. The design is simple, but not too simple. The white streaks that I am guessing to be lines of light are slightly aqua colored, so it really compliments Bulbasaur's main design. The bulb looks semi-translucent. I like how you used eyebrows too! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> The only thing that I can think of right now that you could improve, even in the slightest amount, would be the grass. I think you should a little lighting and shadowing to each bit of grass in the layer between the outside, where it is the brightest, and the inside, where it is darker. Sorry for the extremely long critique. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="417" title="Sweating a little..."/> Lol
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Steve-does-art In reply to DrawPokemon [2017-04-08 13:00:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the critique and all the compliments! ;o;
Yeah this is a digital artwork ^^
True, looking back at it now they are kinda deformed too And I tried to kinda use my own colors instead of just colorpicking them from a official artwork, it kinda worked out but I guess it is maybe a tad bit too bright
So thanks again for taking the time to write a critique and thanks a lot for the feedback! ^^
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ChicoryBlast [2017-03-17 04:56:38 +0000 UTC]
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Wow, it's so adorable and friendly! You've got a really good grasp on the shadows and highlights here. Bulbasaur looks so vibrant and alive! The paint-like style makes it feel homey, attractive, and like a fantastical adventure-type of thing. This Bulbasaur, like the name, really shows some exploration team vibes.
I notice the parts of unshadowed color on the shadows and lighter areas, and it contributes to what makes your Bulbasaur pop out. The hints of brown on the bulb makes it look more like an actual plant. He could just about jump off the screen!
Also, I'm really digging the grass. It gives the atmosphere of the picture a springy, fertile feel, as well as looking great on its own!
This really is a little beaut, and you're right to be happy with it.
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Steve-does-art In reply to ChicoryBlast [2017-04-08 12:57:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the critique and all the compliments! ;o;
It really means a lot to me!
and sorry for the way too late reply
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Steve-does-art In reply to ChicoryBlast [2017-04-15 16:22:28 +0000 UTC]
Oi no problem :3
I try to respond to everything but it gets a bit overwhelming at times so it sometimes takes one or two weeks till I get to a message 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ChicoryBlast In reply to Steve-does-art [2017-04-15 19:25:05 +0000 UTC]
That's cool, but I understand! You've got some really great stuff so you'd definitely get a lot to respond to.
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Steve-does-art In reply to ChicoryBlast [2017-04-15 20:33:36 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's hard to keep up and still be productive at the same time which is why it sometimes seems like I am gone for a few days which is when I just sit down and draw most of the day or maybe play some games and stuff ovo
I have no idea how people like TsaoShin do it cause he usually replies to almost everything too 👍: 0 ⏩: 1
ChicoryBlast In reply to Steve-does-art [2017-04-16 00:05:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh, yeah. I have a problem like that with my art on here. It's hard for me to just sit down and do digital, at least, because I have to keep up with a lot where I am. I don't mind if you go away for a while, I know you're dealing with stuff off of here!
Oh yeah, he's got so many watchers, gets out quality stuff fast, and replies to almost all of them! I have no idea how he does it.
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Steve-does-art In reply to ChicoryBlast [2017-05-02 21:18:51 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, just did it again gdi c:
Got kinda hit by artblock or well, a lot of self-doubt so I got some time to reply to everything again tho :3
And also taking some time to just practise more cause I really need to get better when it comes to drawing stuff without references or correct anatomy and good poses
He draws really fast and during work he's on a pc so he can just reply from there during breaks, I guess that's how he does it? That's at least how I would do it cause I rather do something like that than standing around somewhere and just eat something and do nothing else during a break xD
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Steve-does-art In reply to ChicoryBlast [2017-05-24 22:16:48 +0000 UTC]
Aaaa thanks ;o;
Yeah indeed and it helped me a good amount :3
Been actually sketching stuff that isn't just for practise lately and it's been going quite well
Like for example this sketch here I made for a collab:
Somehow really looks like something Honrupi would draw tbh but the references I used were just official artworks so rip me
Yeah that's true, I've noticed some mistakes I've been doing ever since where I just saw other people do a thing and just did it as well without getting it, like the kinda 3 shaped mouth of cat like creatures
I often drew that as a D which looks kinda weird and it is actually more like a 3 in perspective where you make one side longer and the other shorter depending on how it is viewed
Kinda hard to describe, it's one of the things where you need to look at some pictures of animals to see it ovo
Yeah I hope so but especially with anatomy practise it takes time till it actually shows or helps you really, I don't expect to see too much improvements in like the next few months
Yeah ovo
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Steve-does-art In reply to ChicoryBlast [2017-07-10 22:19:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks and yeah that's true ^^
I mean it wouldn't really matter anyways cause usually styles constantly change even if it is just a little and you can't copy a style one by one anyways o3o
Yup ovo
Oi ok
Haha yeah, but it's worth it in the end o3o
Thanks ^^
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ChicoryBlast In reply to Steve-does-art [2017-07-11 14:09:28 +0000 UTC]
No problem, man! Styles do tend to do that. (Ack my old one was pretty trash)
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Steve-does-art In reply to ElsaRivrwood [2017-03-26 21:58:08 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot for the critique and the compliments! ^^
Oh yeah, the funny thing the actual color of the light is red but I used a luminosity layer so it turned yellow on most parts due to the colors
Shading with black and white is a bad idea since it kinda looks lifeless, I mostly use red for highlights and blue at the time tho really any combination of a warm and cold color works there :3
Mh yeah, I kinda added the outline cause I wanted it to look a bit like a sticker or something but it didn't look good around the grass so I left it away there, here is a version without the oultine but I guess that is kinda up to preference:
And yeah, I know they usually don't have hair or anything like that but I wondered how it would look with it and I liked it so I left it in :3
So thanks again for taking the time to write such a detailed critique!
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HotdogKing9 In reply to TfStuff [2017-06-02 16:27:12 +0000 UTC]
Look who's talking. Care to specify why you wrote such negative stuff about this art?
I read the critique and looked at the picture. Doesn't seem to me you actually have a valid reason to put down someone's work.
my work you could put down since it sucks but yeah sure whatever
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TfStuff In reply to HotdogKing9 [2017-06-02 20:23:53 +0000 UTC]
hey.. this is old and I'm a different person now just ask bitich!
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HotdogKing9 In reply to HotdogKing9 [2017-06-02 16:39:30 +0000 UTC]
And you remember that Deviantart has a 'Fair Critique' policy, right?
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TfStuff In reply to HotdogKing9 [2017-06-02 20:24:09 +0000 UTC]
yeah.. but who cares.
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BrawnyBlaze In reply to TfStuff [2017-03-17 04:20:42 +0000 UTC]
Two to the one to the three
My main is TfStuff and I'm a Deviant
Submitting critiques you wouldn't believe
Gonna roast your ass with a one out of three :^)
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TfStuff In reply to Xael-The-Artist [2017-03-17 03:23:24 +0000 UTC]
that's so like 5 hours ago get in with the times bro. ive already made up.
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AquaTheUmbreon In reply to TfStuff [2017-03-16 23:24:53 +0000 UTC]
This is the FBI you're under arrest for stupidity
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AquaTheUmbreon In reply to AquaTheUmbreon [2017-03-16 23:48:59 +0000 UTC]
Hello hand im very sorry you were cursed with an edgy 10 year old, you deserve better. My condolences.
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Daxite In reply to TfStuff [2017-03-16 23:20:47 +0000 UTC]
my nama jeff
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TfStuff In reply to Daxite [2017-03-16 23:21:44 +0000 UTC]
wut
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Daxite In reply to TfStuff [2017-03-16 23:23:47 +0000 UTC]
my nama jeff
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TfStuff In reply to Daxite [2017-03-16 23:28:39 +0000 UTC]
what does that even mean!!!!!!!
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Daxite In reply to TfStuff [2017-03-16 23:29:31 +0000 UTC]
my nama jeff
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TfStuff In reply to ArcJamie [2017-03-16 21:50:29 +0000 UTC]
who the heell are you!
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ArcJamie In reply to TfStuff [2017-03-16 21:50:55 +0000 UTC]
A fan of Steve's work. Who are you?
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TfStuff In reply to ArcJamie [2017-03-16 21:51:52 +0000 UTC]
non of your bezwax boi
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