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Published: 2010-01-31 00:40:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 3745; Favourites: 202; Downloads: 53
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CHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGE *tackles*
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Uh... hey, Steph! This is really my first time submiting a critique... there's just a couple things I want to point out c;
FIRST, the waving seems to be a bit choppy... and... when their hands go down back to their body, it's a little too fast... you could put another frame with to make the animation a little more smooth... c:
SECOND, when the little red guy (i suppose that's you? :3)reaches out to grab the little grey guy (Madfairy?) the hands seem to come out a little too far...
THIRD,though, this is AMAZING. I love how when you change who the camera is focused on it looks really smooth and bouncy! AND I LOVE HOW YOU COLOR YOUR EMOTES! The shading is perfect!
I hope you don't think this was too harsh! c:
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Aww, then I'm honoured that you picked one of my Emotes to critique first.
I'll definitely have a look at those things you pointed out, I didn't actually notice how choppy it looked until you mentioned it, so I'll see what I can do.
Thanks again!
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Yay! I'm glad you're honored! c: and you're welcome!
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i will say straight out this made me laugh so hard. :3
the idea itself is great: epic and total GLOMP
but it has been used numerous times before. what you've done here pushes that idea just far enough beyond the rest to make one awesome emote.
it starts out with the two waving, smiling at each other from a distance. then it zooms out, making them both into teeny little dots. this emphasizes the way the red emote bounces up to and leaps onto the grey one, then tumbling along the screen, completing the glomp.
a great deviation and a wonderful emote, overall visually and mentally entertaining.
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aweh hehe Np my friend!~ <3 >w<
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cute too. Love how they gets smaller when zoomed out. Worked smoothly ^^
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It doesn't work like that unfortunately 
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A quick note to let you know that this deviation has been featured in the news piece, Random Emote Awesomeness - Volume 8 .
If you enjoy the article, please consider faving it so that others can discover the art and artists showcased. -- Cheers, *Ravenswd
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No problem! I like your emotes.
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