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step-into-darkness — C.L.H. Chapter 2, page 2 draft
Published: 2010-01-26 07:57:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1177; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 10
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An original story.Title: Castle in the Light of Hyiero.
Chapter 2: "The Final Battle"
Page 1: [link]
FULL Chapter 1 [link]
ok this has got to be the nastiest thing ive ever drawn in my life...so id like for anyone that reads this to comment and tell me whether u think this kinda thing is too much for this comic.. i m not necessarily planning on doing a lot of graphic scenes, i just dont want ppl to think this is some talkative boring comic so i threw it in there just for shock value..
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Umm...yyyyyeahh...if u dont know what just happened ur retarded..lol ...or maybe im retarded...someones retarded...
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thank uuuu... 
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hey there...so, here are the pages i said i was uploading...well this [link] is the redone page i was talking about, and there are links to the next pages in artist comments... ttyl..
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The colors...are so...beautiful... 
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thank u VERY much...i would never think beautiful would be a word used on a page where a mans face is being incinerated in the shape of fingers, but if thats what u think, i wont argue 
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haha, you have a point! 
I read some of the comments at the first chapter (it was one guy telling you that your story is not original) and i agree with you that it is impossible to write a story with no influence AT ALL! (i write a very big sci-fi/fantasy story and i'm afraid that it's going to be like star wars mixed with lord of the rings! 
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that guy was a douche bag 
Im sure ur story is going to be original anyway... the key is to know enough facts about star wars and lord of the rings so that u dont take anything that is exact to their story...ive read enough stories like mine that i know how to go about it so it doesnt clash with anyone elses...but this is a story about super powers, how much different can i make it, u know... i think i put a great twist on it though, and u agree, so he's wrong...
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Love the character building in this story, The egyptian theme gives it an awesome appeal and I love the bad guys here. Great story line! cant wait for more!
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i have a whooole lot planned for this, story wise... i wish i could do it faster thats the only problem... when it comes to coloring, and sometimes the art,i dont know what the hec im doing so it takes forever... every page so far has had something i never drew before and something i had to learn how to color..haha i need a staff...
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Definatly attracts attention. xD Hey I tihnk its fine.
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cool cool...im waiting for someone to say "u disgust me, im taking u off my watch" lol
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I doubt that'll happen. Dont worry man.
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wow, great stuff...love the fighting ^^ well done
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thank you lots.. it took me god knows how many hours to do this...the problem is im still kinda new to the whole digital coloring thing..especially this style, so it takes me forever...glad u like it though...
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heheh i do...well that hard work shows ^^ it looks graet
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Wow! It's a bit... *can't think of proper word* But i like it... it gets people to notice this page easier, like a grabber in a story line...
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ok cool... its a bit "DISGUSTING" is the word u were probably looking for
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woooooooowww!!!11!!
those egyptian looking people are AWESOME!!!
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Thank you... i wanted to make something that was clearly egyptian while not be TOO old school looking... They are the Leians that are under the command of Mosi Odian (the egyptian guy from chap 1)... THANKS AGAIN
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wow, ur comic is getting more and more awesome!
I wish I had mpre time to work on my comic, but my stupid teachers are giving me lots of stupid homework!
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homework is a sonovabitch man, i hated it with the passion of christ...but when home work just becomes "work" ur gonna miss it, cause work sucks even more...
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noooo, when I become an author it's gonna be so much easier then than it is now 
Im already working on a masterpiece!!
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eeeep! aah, sorry
yes, masterpiece..
uhmm..gotta write.. uhmm!
noooo
10% and u give me a brownie and a pear cider and u have a deal
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aaah come'on, not the pear cider
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noooo, newbaked brownies! WITH CHOCOLAT PIECES IN!!! woaaaaa
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i like brownies.. and cheesecake
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hahaha 
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I like the buiscuit bottom part
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ull get ur beloved bottom 
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