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Published: 2008-11-26 11:16:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 80; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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My Secret SantaBy: Stella
Her face shines brightly,
With everything ready,
And the party about to begin,
"Is this the perfect night I wanted?"
She thought to herself,
Something was missing,
But what can it be?
The doorbell rang,
The door opens to
a sweet sunshine smile,
Her boyfriend was outside,
"Did you forget me?"
With just one glimpse,
She starts to laugh,
He had on a silly red outfit,
Next day she told her friends,
A kiss on the lip with dear "Santa"
Was what she got as a preasent,
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Comments: 4
aw, I actually think this is really cute! The only thing that I see that looks just a little strange (no offense) is the last two lines..they only sound kind of weird since you end them both with day. It's not a huge deal, but yeah..I really like it! nicely done ^^
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thanks, I can handle that! lol I never noticed the last two lines being like that, but now that you mentioned it, it does seem kinda odd! My gosh! I owe you for doing this! Thank you! :]
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lol You don't have to thank me! It was my pleasure, you've got talent! Very creative ideas ^^
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Thanks! Oh! And I changed it, just in case you would like to know, I still have the original somewhere in my computer.
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