tsand106 [2017-04-22 08:15:54 +0000 UTC]
Mod Message: Hi there, how exciting to see snow getting such cool new upgrades. Unfortunately, there are some things that need to be fixed.
Snow’s arms are too long and his feet are too small, remember to keep those nice bulky biped feet with short arms, once he’s a year old you can give him the same sized limbs to lengthen those arms a bit!
Also wyngrew do not have an overbite, the tops and bottom of the mouth should meet at the front of the jaws.
Lastly, I am afraid that Snow does not qualify for a feathered tail tip. The animation required needs to be unique frames, where the entire body changes, as well as being a "leaping animation", instead of having the arms flair on a static body!
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Please reply to me here so that we know you understand. We know you are capable of putting in a bit more effort, so let’s see what you can do!
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